List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子直接回答问题，并用连接词组织句子，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my studies because it helps me complete tasks one by one and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: 表达不够自然，词汇使用不当。建议用更准确的词汇和句型表达观点，并避免重复。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember things without writing them down.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议明确表达偏好，使用完整句子，并解释原因。

例: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to access, whereas paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× I usually make a list for my study because it can help me doing the things 1 by 1 and never forget things I didn't doing.

✓ I usually make a list for my study because it can help me do the things one by one and never forget things I didn't do.

动词help后面应接动词原形do，而不是doing。didn't后面也应接动词原形do，不能用doing。

× I can't forget anything important and you can mention me.

✓ I can't forget anything important and you can remind me.

这里的'mention me'用法错误，应使用'remind me'表示提醒我。

× They can mentions anything themselves, yeah.

✓ They can mention anything themselves, yeah.

情态动词can后应接动词原形mention，不能用第三人称单数形式mentions。

× Actually, I prefer to make at least on the on my because it's convenient and it's easy to take out my list.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make at least one on my phone because it's convenient and it's easy to take out my list.

句中缺少名词one和phone，且介词on后应接名词短语，原句结构混乱，需补充完整。

× Like if you write on the paper, maybe you'll forget to get to.

✓ Like if you write on paper, maybe you'll forget to bring it.

write后面搭配介词on paper，不用加定冠词the；forget to get to表达不准确，应改为forget to bring it表示忘记带。