List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it reminds me of what to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items. This way, I shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and better linking. Avoid fragmented sentences and explain how the list helps you. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I make a list of my work tasks by setting alarms and reminders on my phone because it helps me keep track of deadlines. This method allows me to manage my time efficiently and complete tasks on time.

提案: Good content and structure, but try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. For example, use 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to connect ideas.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they are confident in their memory and see no need to write things down. Moreover, they may find list-making to be extra work and feel restricted by having to follow it strictly.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain your preference clearly.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can set alarms and reminders. This helps me remember important deadlines, such as project submissions, which I might forget if I only wrote them down on paper.

× Yes, I make a list while I do shopping because it helps me get reminder what to buy and what not to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list while I am shopping because it helps me get reminders of what to buy and what not to buy.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'am shopping' to indicate the ongoing action. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' and needs the preposition 'of' to connect with the object. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So helping uh, making a list is very important because we are not good at remembering things.

✓ So, making a list is very important because we are not good at remembering things.

The word 'helping' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The gerund 'making' alone correctly functions as the subject. Removing 'helping' corrects the sentence structure.

× Is the daily usage of tasks which has to be completed and submitted and yet to be submitted on time.

✓ It is the daily list of tasks that have to be completed and submitted on time, including those yet to be submitted.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'It is' introduces the subject, and rephrasing clarifies the meaning. Also, 'tasks' is plural, so 'have' is used instead of 'has'.

× So setting alarms is very useful and reminders us writing is not is not possible because we will forget everything on time.

✓ So setting alarms and reminders is very useful because writing things down is not always possible, and we might forget everything on time.

The phrase 'reminders us writing is not is not possible' is incorrect. It should be rephrased to clarify that writing is not always possible, and setting alarms/reminders helps. Also, 'is not is not' is a repetition error.