List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在重复词汇（如“both both”），应注意避免重复，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it enables me to stick to my budget and avoid impulse buying, which ultimately saves both time and money.

提案: 回答中出现了语法错误（如“making a list gravity”），应注意用词准确和语法正确，同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember urgent tasks and organize my day more effectively. As a result, it improves my work efficiency and reduces stress.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇（如“some some”，“there if”），需要避免，同时可以用更多具体例子或原因丰富内容。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and prefer to be more spontaneous. Additionally, they might find lists stressful, especially if they have trouble completing all the tasks.

提案: 回答中有遗漏和重复（如“on my”，“appointment appointment”），表达不完整且有语法错误，应注意完整表达和避免重复。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient. For example, I can quickly add or delete items anytime, and since I always have my phone with me, I won't forget important appointments.

× Besides, it allows me to manage my budget better and avoid impulse purchases, which saves both both time and money.

✓ Besides, it allows me to manage my budget better and avoid impulse purchases, which saves both time and money.

句子中出现了重复的单词“both”，属于多余重复，应删除一个“both”以保证表达简洁准确。

× I find that making a list gravity improves my work efficiency and reduce stress.

✓ I find that making a list greatly improves my work efficiency and reduces stress.

原句中“gravity”应为副词“greatly”，且主语“making a list”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“improves”和“reduces”。

× Some some people may feel that this adds unnecessary stress or pressure, especially if there if they struggle to complete all items.

✓ Some people may feel that this adds unnecessary stress or pressure, especially if they struggle to complete all items.

句中“Some some”和“there if”均为重复错误，应删除多余部分，保证句子通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on my because it is very convenient and useful.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient and useful.

句中缺少名词“phone”，导致代词“my”后无所指，需补充完整名词以保证句意完整。

× This way I don't forget. I won't forget important texts for appointment appointment.

✓ This way I don't forget. I won't forget important texts for appointments.

“appointment appointment”重复出现，应删除重复词，并且“appointment”应使用复数形式“appointments”以符合语境。