List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Actually yes, I always remember to make a list before I shopping. You know, it can remind me to buy something like the vegetables, the fruit and so on. So I would not forget my my list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Of course, making a list helps me to improve my efficiency. For example, when I need to finish many tasks together, I prefer to organize them and prioritize them in the list. In this way, I can manage my time better.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
For one thing, maybe they have a strong memory and can easily remember their texts without writing them down, and they think it took too much time for them to listing so they prefer.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Actually I prefer the later 1. You know, I can take my with me and it is more convenient to write down my notes in the digital apps and I can edit them easily then.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“before I shopping”应为“before I go shopping”，且表达略显重复，如“remind me to buy something like the vegetables, the fruit and so on”可以更具体。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并用更具体的例子丰富内容。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go shopping. It helps me remember to buy essential items like fresh vegetables and fruits, so I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，使用了举例说明，表达较自然。但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅，如使用“therefore”或“so”。建议加强连接词的使用，使表达更连贯。
例: Of course, making a list helps me improve my efficiency. For example, when I have many tasks to complete, I organize and prioritize them in the list. Therefore, I can manage my time better.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it took too much time for them to listing”应为“it takes too much time to make a list”，且表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并补充更多细节。
例: Some people might not like making lists because they have a strong memory and can remember things easily. Also, they think it takes too much time to make a list, so they prefer to rely on their memory.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“the later 1”应为“the latter one”，“I can take my with me”不完整。建议注意完整表达，避免口语化错误，并使用更准确的词汇。
例: Actually, I prefer the latter option. I can take my phone with me, and it's more convenient to write notes in digital apps because I can edit them easily.
文法
× Actually yes, I always remember to make a list before I shopping.
✓ Actually yes, I always remember to make a list before I go shopping.
动词后面需要使用动词原形或动名词形式，这里 'before I shopping' 缺少动词，正确用法是 'before I go shopping'。
× You know, it can remind me to buy something like the vegetables, the fruit and so on.
✓ You know, it can remind me to buy things like vegetables, fruit and so on.
'something' 是不可数或单数，后面不应跟复数名词 'the vegetables'，应改为复数 'things like vegetables'，且水果 'fruit' 通常作为不可数名词使用，不加冠词。
× So I would not forget my my list.
✓ So I would not forget my list.
句中重复了 'my'，应删除多余的一个。
× Actually I prefer the later 1.
✓ Actually I prefer the latter one.
'later' 是比较级，表示时间上的“更晚”，此处应使用 'latter' 表示“后者”，且数字 '1' 应写为 'one'。
× You know, I can take my with me and it is more convenient to write down my notes in the digital apps and I can edit them easily then.
✓ You know, I can take it with me and it is more convenient to write down my notes in digital apps and I can edit them easily then.
'take my with me' 中缺少宾语，应为 'take it with me'；'in the digital apps' 中 'the' 不必要，通常说 'in digital apps'。
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