List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "remind me some things" nên là "reminds me of some things". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn như "avoid buying more than necessary" thay vì "avoid by more than necessary".

例: Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it is convenient and reminds me of things I might forget. It also helps me avoid buying more than necessary.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, "save how much time" nên là "save a lot of time". Ngoài ra, câu ví dụ nên hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, tránh bỏ dở câu như "to have a good".

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work and study because they are very helpful and save a lot of time. For example, before an exam, I make a list of topics I need to study to perform well.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên mở rộng ý với ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are very busy and have many tasks to do in one day, so they don't have time to make a list. Moreover, some may find lists restrictive and prefer to work spontaneously.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn, ví dụ "make this" nên là "make lists". Ngoài ra, câu ví dụ nên rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh dùng thì tương lai không cần thiết khi nói về thói quen hiện tại.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to carry everywhere. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I usually bring my phone instead of paper.

× Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it's convenient and remind me some things if I forget and avoid by more than necessary.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it's convenient and reminds me of some things if I forget and helps me avoid buying more than necessary.

The verb 'remind' should be in the third person singular form 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'remind me some things' is incorrect; it should be 'reminds me of some things'. The phrase 'avoid by more than necessary' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me avoid buying more than necessary'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and proper verb usage.

× Yes, I often make a list for my work, my study because it's very helpful and save how much time.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work and my study because it's very helpful and saves a lot of time.

The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'how much time' is awkward here; 'a lot of time' is more natural. The conjunction 'and' is added between 'work' and 'my study' for clarity.

× For example, before the exam I will make a list what I need to study to have a good.

✓ For example, before the exam, I will make a list of what I need to study to do well.

The phrase 'make a list what I need' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of what I need'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'to have a good', which is incomplete. It is corrected to 'to do well' to complete the thought. Commas are added for clarity.

× I prefer to make this on my phone because it's convenient and easy to bring everywhere.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because it's convenient and easy to carry everywhere.

The phrase 'easy to bring everywhere' is awkward; 'easy to carry everywhere' is more appropriate. 'Bring' is generally used with a destination, while 'carry' refers to holding or transporting something, which fits better here.