List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторов. Например, начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и результат. Также исправьте грамматические ошибки.

例: Yes, I do make a list when I shop. Before I got married, I didn't think it was necessary, but after buying unnecessary items a few times and going over my budget, my husband advised me to start making lists.

提案: Ответ можно улучшить, сделав его более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова и уточните, как списки помогают вам в повседневной жизни.

例: Actually, I don't have a job because I'm a housewife. However, I make lists for shopping and daily housework tasks such as washing dishes, cleaning, and vacuuming, which help me stay organized.

提案: Ответ должен быть более развернутым и связным. Используйте более точную лексику и объясните причины более подробно с примерами.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it tiresome and often forget to do it. However, I believe lists are important because they help organize tasks and save time.

提案: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и связным, избегая повторов. Добавьте детали, почему использование телефона удобнее, и используйте связующие слова.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and saves time. Before going shopping, I create and save my list on my phone, which makes it easy to access.

× Yes I do but before my marriage I didn't really think it's necessary to make a list but after marriage when few times I bought unnecessary things and went out of my budget, my husband advised me to do some list.

✓ Yes, I do, but before my marriage I didn't really think it was necessary to make a list. However, after marriage, when a few times I bought unnecessary things and went over my budget, my husband advised me to make a list.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'It's necessary' should be 'it was necessary' to match the past context. Also, 'do some list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Additionally, 'went out of my budget' should be 'went over my budget'. These corrections ensure proper past tense usage and correct expressions.

× ...after marriage when few times I bought unnecessary things...

✓ ...after marriage when a few times I bought unnecessary things...

The phrase 'few times' without an article implies almost none, which is likely not intended. Using 'a few times' correctly indicates some occasions. This is a common quantifier error.

× ...and went out of my budget...

✓ ...and went over my budget...

The correct preposition to indicate exceeding a budget is 'over', not 'out of'. 'Went out of my budget' is incorrect usage.

× ...my husband advised me to do some list.

✓ ...my husband advised me to make a list.

The phrase 'do some list' is incorrect. The correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'some' is not used with countable singular nouns like 'list'.

× Actually I don't work, I'm a housewife, so I only make a list when I go to the shopping or I make a list of what should I do today, like about housework, like washing dishes, cleaning, vacuuming.

✓ Actually, I don't work; I'm a housewife, so I only make a list when I go shopping or I make a list of what I should do today, like housework such as washing dishes, cleaning, and vacuuming.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'what should I do today' should be 'what I should do today' to maintain correct word order in indirect questions.

× ...I make a list of what should I do today...

✓ ...I make a list of what I should do today...

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not verb + subject. Therefore, 'what should I do' changes to 'what I should do'.

× I think making list is a little tiresome and usually people forget doing that.

✓ I think making a list is a little tiresome and usually people forget to do that.

The phrase 'making list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'forget doing that' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forget to do that'.

× I think making list is a little tiresome...

✓ I think making a list is a little tiresome...

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× ...usually people forget doing that.

✓ ...usually people forget to do that.

After the verb 'forget', the correct form is the infinitive 'to do', not the gerund 'doing'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error here.