List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。自然な英語表現を使い、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。例えば、"I don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously."のように言えます。

例: I don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りがあり、意味が不明瞭です。明確な理由と具体的な説明を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I usually don't make a to-do list because I prefer to decide my tasks based on priority at the moment."のように言えます。

例: I usually don't make a to-do list because I prefer to decide my tasks based on priority at the moment.

提案: 質問の意図に合った答えになっていません。質問に直接答え、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous."のように言えます。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous.

提案: 答えは理解できますが、表現が少し不自然です。理由をより具体的にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can access it anytime."のように言えます。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can access it anytime.

× No, I don't make a list when I go shop because I can't to can't make to plan.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I can't make a plan.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'to can't' and 'to plan'. The modal verb 'can' should be followed directly by the base verb without 'to'. Also, 'go shop' should be 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by a gerund to indicate the activity.

× No, I usually don't make A to do list for my work because I don't plan my task in advance.

✓ No, I usually don't make a to-do list for my work because I don't plan my tasks in advance.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the general meaning.

× Instead I often decide what to do personally depending my move on product key at the moment.

✓ Instead, I often decide what to do personally depending on my move on product key at the moment.

The verb 'depend' requires the preposition 'on'. The phrase 'depending my move' is incorrect; it should be 'depending on my move'. Also, a comma after 'Instead' improves clarity.

× I don't like making this because I just want to think on how I feel.

✓ I don't like making lists because I just want to think about how I feel.

The pronoun 'this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. Also, the preposition 'on' after 'think' is incorrect; it should be 'think about'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's useful and it can be anytime.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's useful and I can access it anytime.

The phrase 'it can be anytime' is unclear and incorrectly placed. Adding 'I can access it anytime' clarifies the meaning and corrects the adverb placement.