List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I am quite organized. It helps me remember the important items I need to buy.

提案: 回答中有较多语气词和语法错误，建议减少口头语，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I make a list while working because it helps me focus on the tasks I need to complete and prioritize the most important ones. I find it very effective.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to explore things spontaneously and enjoy discovering new experiences without planning.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不清，建议使用准确词汇，避免重复，表达更简洁明了。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many efficient apps that help me write down tasks and remind me to stick to my plan.

× I am a quite organized person so I will make a list before I when I go to shopping so that I won't forget to buy the important stuff that I needed that I need.

✓ I am quite an organized person, so I will make a list before I go shopping so that I won't forget to buy the important stuff that I need.

这里的'stuff'是不可数名词，不需要复数形式。句中'needed'应改为现在时态'need'，因为表达的是现在的需求。

× before I when I go to shopping

✓ before I go shopping

短语中'go to shopping'是不正确的用法，正确表达是'go shopping'，不需要介词'to'。

× making a list help you to concentrate on the work you, uh, you needed to do

✓ making a list helps you to concentrate on the work you need to do

主语'making a list'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'helps'。另外，'needed'应改为现在时态'need'，因为指的是当前需要完成的工作。

× what is the most important things as present

✓ what the most important things are at present

句子结构不正确，'what is the most important things'应改为'what the most important things are'，并且'present'前应使用介词'at'。

× enjoy the taking experience

✓ enjoy the experience

'taking experience'是不正确的表达，正确用法是'enjoy the experience'，不需要'taking'。

× counting across with something new and special for you

✓ coming across something new and special for you

短语应为'come across something'，表示偶然遇到，'counting across with'是不正确的搭配。

× I think I prefer to make a list on the form

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on the phone

'form'应为'phone'，这里是打字错误，且'form'不是合适的名词。

× there are a lot of like efficient efficient app that help you to to write down this and to remind you on the form

✓ there are a lot of efficient apps that help you write this down and remind you on the phone

'efficient efficient'重复，应去掉一个；'app'应使用复数'apps'；'help you to to write down this'中多余的'to'应去掉；'on the form'应为'on the phone'。

× actually helped you to stick on the plan by yourself

✓ actually helps you stick to the plan by yourself

'stick on the plan'应为'stick to the plan'，介词用法错误；'helped'应为现在时态'helps'，与上下文时态一致。