List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find shopping relaxing. I prefer to browse and buy things that catch my interest rather than planning everything in advance.

提案: 回答中有较多语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并避免重复和无意义的填充词。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work, but they don't always help me stay organized. Sometimes I write tasks down but then forget about them, so the lists are not very effective for me.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达存在较大问题。建议用更简单明了的句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because it limits their freedom and can be stressful if they don't complete all the tasks. They may prefer a more flexible and creative approach to work.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议注意句子结构，使用正确的介词和连词，使表达更自然。

例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because it feels more natural, and I remember things better. Also, using paper is convenient and doesn't get interrupted by phone calls or notifications.

× No, of course no.

✓ No, of course not.

这里的否定回答应该用 'not' 而不是 'no'，因为 'of course not' 是固定搭配，表示强烈否定。

× I think shopping is a relaxing for me so I don't want to plan it.

✓ I think shopping is relaxing for me so I don't want to plan it.

'relaxing' 是形容词，前面不需要冠词 'a'，因为它是不可数形容词。

× I think plan will make it too seriously and this enjoyable.

✓ I think planning will make it too serious and less enjoyable.

'plan' 应该用动名词 'planning' 表示动作，'seriously' 是副词，应该用形容词 'serious' 来修饰 'it'，并且句意应为“太严肃且不那么愉快”，所以用 'less enjoyable'。

× I usually went to shop and find something interesting, I'll buy it.

✓ I usually go shopping and if I find something interesting, I'll buy it.

'usually' 表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 'go'，'went' 是过去时不合适；'to shop' 应改为动名词 'shopping'；'find' 前加条件连词 'if' 使句子完整。

× I make a list for my work regularly but it doesn't work as I expect.

✓ I make a list for my work regularly but it doesn't work as I expect it to.

句尾缺少宾语 'it to'，使句子完整，符合英语习惯。

× For me this is only I write them and then put them on my table then they will go out.

✓ For me, I only write them and then put them on my table, then they will be forgotten.

原句表达不清，'only' 应放在动词前；'go out' 用法不当，改为 'be forgotten' 更符合语境。

× I don't want to list.

✓ I don't want to make a list.

'list' 是名词，前面需要动词 'make' 来构成短语 'make a list'。

× In my opinion I think making this may be a few limit freedom and I think making this is a stressful thing for them especially they don't finish them this only creative affair.

✓ In my opinion, I think making lists may limit freedom a little, and I think making lists is a stressful thing for them, especially if they don't finish them; it's only a creative affair.

'a few' 用法错误，应改为 'a little'；'making this' 应改为 'making lists'；句子结构混乱，需分句并补充连词使语义清晰。

× For me, I think I prefer make a list on paper rather than on phone.

✓ For me, I think I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on the phone.

'prefer' 后应接不定式 'to make'；'phone' 前需加定冠词 'the'。

× I think make this phone paper is more natural and I will remember things better than phone.

✓ I think making a list on paper is more natural and I will remember things better than on the phone.

'make this phone paper' 语序错误，应为 'making a list on paper'；比较时应保持结构一致，'than on the phone'。

× I think it's convenient and not be disturbing with phone calling on others.

✓ I think it's convenient and not disturbing because of phone calls from others.

'not be disturbing' 语法错误，应为 'not disturbing'；'phone calling on others' 表达不当，应改为 'phone calls from others'。