List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'liquid arithmetic' và nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc bạn làm danh sách mua sắm như thế nào.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy, especially food and household supplies.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách trong công việc và hiệu quả của nó.

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and avoid missing important deadlines.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không đầy đủ và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết hợp lý.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or feel that it limits their freedom to be spontaneous.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do cụ thể cho sự lựa chọn của mình.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I don't forget my list like I sometimes do with paper lists.

× Yes, I think it's a very necessary for me to make a liquid arithmetic because I can remember something I went to buy like food loves.

✓ Yes, I think it's very necessary for me to make a list because I can remember what I went to buy, like food items.

The phrase 'a very necessary' is incorrect because 'necessary' is an adjective and does not need an article 'a' before it. Also, 'liquid arithmetic' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'list' fits the context. 'Food loves' is incorrect; 'food items' or 'groceries' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I think it's a very necessary for me to make a liquid arithmetic because I can remember something I went to buy like food loves.

✓ Yes, I think it's very necessary for me to make a list because I can remember what I went to buy, like food items.

The phrase 'something I went to buy' is unclear; 'what I went to buy' is the correct relative pronoun usage to refer to the items intended for purchase.

× I think when I work, I constantly on my schedule and I think it's a very important to me to make a list because I can again their schedule clearly and I can so many problem yes that.

✓ I think when I work, I constantly follow my schedule and I think it's very important for me to make a list because I can organize my schedule clearly and avoid many problems.

'Constantly on my schedule' is incorrect; 'constantly follow my schedule' is correct. 'A very important' should be 'very important' without 'a'. 'Again their schedule clearly' is unclear; likely meant 'organize my schedule clearly'. 'I can so many problem yes that' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'avoid many problems' for clarity.

× I think when I work, I constantly on my schedule and I think it's a very important to me to make a list because I can again their schedule clearly and I can so many problem yes that.

✓ I think when I work, I constantly follow my schedule and I think it's very important for me to make a list because I can organize my schedule clearly and avoid many problems.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's own schedule.

× Oh, I think there are several reasons why some people like making lists. Because I think they feel disturbed and no.

✓ Oh, I think there are several reasons why some people do not like making lists. I think they feel disturbed and uncomfortable.

The sentence 'Because I think they feel disturbed and no.' is incomplete and unclear. 'Like making lists' contradicts the question about why some people do not like making lists. The correction clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× Oh, I think there are several reasons why some people like making lists. Because I think they feel disturbed and no.

✓ Oh, I think there are several reasons why some people do not like making lists. I think they feel disturbed and uncomfortable.

The pronoun 'no' is incorrectly used and unclear. It is replaced with 'uncomfortable' to express the intended meaning.

× Alright, I'm interested in making a link in my my phone because when I making a list on paper I usually forget them at home.

✓ Alright, I'm interested in making a list on my phone because when I make a list on paper, I usually forget it at home.

The phrase 'making a link in my my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list on my phone'. 'When I making' should be 'when I make' to use the correct verb form. 'Forget them' is incorrect because 'list' is singular; it should be 'forget it'.

× Alright, I'm interested in making a link in my my phone because when I making a list on paper I usually forget them at home.

✓ Alright, I'm interested in making a list on my phone because when I make a list on paper, I usually forget it at home.

After 'when I', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'making'.