List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有些表达重复且不够连贯。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I often go shopping to hang out with my friends. I tend to buy things spontaneously when I see something I like.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词组织内容。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but I often can't finish everything by the end of the day. At first, I tried to do all tasks in one day, but later I realized it's better to focus on two or three important tasks.

提案: 表达观点时有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I don't like making lists because I feel they limit my freedom. I prefer to decide what to do spontaneously rather than following a strict schedule.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些重复和语法问题。建议减少重复，使用更准确的表达，并保持句子简洁。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anytime and anywhere. On the other hand, paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× No, I actually wanna go to a shop.

✓ No, I actually want to go to a shop.

wanna是口语缩写形式，正式书面语中应使用want to。建议使用完整形式以符合正式语境。

× I just want to go like hang out with my friends.

✓ I just want to go hang out with my friends.

go后面直接接动词原形hang out，不需要like。like在这里用法错误，建议去掉like。

× Maybe we can chat in a in a way.

✓ Maybe we can chat in a way.

句中重复了“in a”，应删除多余部分。建议注意避免重复词语。

× I usually buy something when I look at it and I decided in just a very short time.

✓ I usually buy something when I look at it and I decide in just a very short time.

句中时态不一致，前半句为一般现在时，后半句用过去时decided不合适，应改为一般现在时decide。建议保持时态一致。

× Yeah, I would say that I usually make a list for my work, but it was it always cannot be finished when I when in the end of my work, 'cause in my first opinion I want to do everything in one day.

✓ Yeah, I would say that I usually make a list for my work, but it always cannot be finished by the end of my work, because at first I want to do everything in one day.

was it always语序错误，应改为it always。when in the end of my work表达不自然，应改为by the end of my work。'cause应改为because。建议注意语序和介词使用。

× But after that I realized that I cannot have this ability, so I just do some two to three lists.

✓ But after that I realized that I cannot have this ability, so I just make two to three lists.

do some two to three lists表达不正确，应该用make lists。建议使用正确动词搭配。

× Yeah, I'm the people who don't want to make a list.

✓ Yeah, I'm one of the people who don't want to make a list.

I'm the people语法错误，主语是单数I，people是复数，需改为one of the people。建议注意主谓一致和代词使用。

× In my opinion, I think make a list. Just just make my life in the limitation.

✓ In my opinion, I think making a list just limits my life.

原句结构不完整且用词不当，make a list应改为making a list作主语，in the limitation表达不自然，应改为limits my life。建议调整句子结构和用词。

× I need freedom and I prefer to do something just I decide, decide in a short time.

✓ I need freedom and I prefer to do something that I decide in a short time.

just I decide缺少关系代词that，导致句子不完整。建议补充关系代词。

× I I don't like the schedule actually.

✓ I don't like the schedule actually.

重复使用I，属于口语中的重复，应删除多余的I。建议注意避免重复。

× Well, I definitely like to make this in my phone because in my phone I can open up every, every, everywhere, anywhere and every time and when I want to look at that.

✓ Well, I definitely like to make this on my phone because on my phone I can open it everywhere, anytime when I want to look at it.

make this in my phone应改为on my phone，open up every, every, everywhere, anywhere and every time表达重复且不规范，改为open it everywhere, anytime。建议注意介词和表达简洁。

× But when I make the list on my on the paper, I need to bring it in in my pocket and sometimes maybe I will lose it.

✓ But when I make the list on paper, I need to bring it in my pocket and sometimes I might lose it.

on my on the paper重复且不自然，应改为on paper。bring it in in my pocket重复，应改为in my pocket。maybe I will改为I might更合适。建议注意介词和词语重复。