List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I might forget some items if I don't write them down.

提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议避免重复，使用正确的时态和句型，清楚表达原因。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to do next.

提案: 表达不流畅，语法和词汇使用不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming.

提案: 表达中有词汇错误和语法问题，句子不完整。建议使用正确的词汇，完整表达理由，并使用连接词。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and there are many apps that help me remember things.

× I make a I make a list when I go to shop because I think maybe I forget something in my supermarket or shopping store, so I need to make a list.

✓ I make a list when I go shopping because I think maybe I will forget something in the supermarket or shopping store, so I need to make a list.

这里“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，因为“go shopping”是固定搭配，表示去购物。

× I make a I make a list when I go to shop because I think maybe I forget something in my supermarket or shopping store, so I need to make a list.

✓ I make a list when I go shopping because I think maybe I will forget something in the supermarket or shopping store, so I need to make a list.

“forget”前应加助动词“will”表示将来可能发生的动作。

× Yes, I make a list for my work too. Because I think they will be told me what I need to go next time.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work too because I think they will tell me what I need to do next time.

“will be told me”结构错误，应改为“will tell me”，因为“tell”是主动语态，且“be told me”不符合英语语法。

× Yes, I make a list for my work too. Because I think they will be told me what I need to go next time.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work too because I think they will tell me what I need to do next time.

句子不应以“Because”开头，应与前句合并，形成完整句子。

× MMM maybe they think it's a very terrible and troubling and make a list you need to spare sometimes so they don't like that maybe.

✓ Maybe they think it's very terrible and troublesome, and making a list takes time, so they don't like it.

“troubling”应改为“troublesome”，且“make a list you need to spare sometimes”表达不清，应改为“making a list takes time”。

× I prefer I prefer to list on my phone because it's very coincident and fun.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and fun.

“to list on my phone”应改为“to make a list on my phone”，且“coincident”用错，应为“convenient”。

× Have a lot of app lets me to use or remember something.

✓ There are a lot of apps that help me to use or remember things.

句子缺主语，应加“there are”，且“app”应为复数“apps”，“lets me to use”应改为“help me to use”。