List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid filler words to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget essential items. I find it saves time and makes shopping more efficient.

提案: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly unclear towards the end. Try to structure your response with clear linking words and avoid vague phrases. Also, check for grammatical accuracy and clarity.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list as soon as I arrive at the office. I write down all my tasks for the day and prioritize quick tasks first, which helps me manage my time effectively.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid incomplete or confusing sentences.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it can be overwhelming to see all their tasks at once. This constant reminder might cause anxiety about unfinished work.

提案: Your answer is clear but has minor grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words. Also, be careful with sentence structure for better clarity.

例: I prefer making to-do lists on paper, especially sticky notes, so I can place them in front of me and tick off tasks as I complete them. However, for shopping lists, I use my phone because it's more convenient and eco-friendly.

× Yes, I usually make a list before I go for shopping because it makes me feel organized and ensure that I ensure I I don't forget the essential things.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it makes me feel organized and ensures that I don't forget the essential things.

The verb 'ensure' should be in the third person singular form 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The repeated 'I ensure I' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× Overall, I love that it's very it's not very time consuming and it makes the work.

✓ Overall, I love that it's not very time-consuming and it makes the work easier.

The phrase 'very it's not very time consuming' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'not very time-consuming' with a hyphen as a compound adjective. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'easier' clarifies the meaning.

× I do make a list for my work as soon as I reach the office at my table and I write it down for everything that I have to do or complete during the day, and I prioritize each task that takes maybe less than a minute to finish.

✓ I do make a list for my work as soon as I reach the office and sit at my table. I write down everything that I have to do or complete during the day, and I prioritize each task that takes less than a minute to finish.

The original sentence is a run-on and confusing. Breaking it into two sentences improves clarity. Also, 'at my table' should be 'and sit at my table' to complete the idea.

× In my opinion, some people might not like making this because it might overwhelm them to re or con by constantly reminding them how much task you have to complete throughout the day.

✓ In my opinion, some people might not like making lists because it might overwhelm them by constantly reminding them how many tasks they have to complete throughout the day.

The phrase 'making this' is unclear; 'making lists' is correct. 'Overwhelm them to re or con' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'overwhelm them by'. Also, 'how much task' should be 'how many tasks' because 'tasks' is countable.

× And I think people can get anxious because of the tasks that they have left pending for the day.

✓ And I think people can get anxious because of the tasks they have left pending for the day.

The pronoun 'that' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for smoother, more natural English.

× I prefer making A to do list on a paper a specifically on a sticky note so that I can stick in front of me and check it throughout the day after I complete each task.

✓ I prefer making a to-do list on paper, specifically on a sticky note, so that I can stick it in front of me and check it throughout the day after I complete each task.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. 'On a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper' without an article. Also, 'stick in front of me' needs the object 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× But the shopping list and everything, I like to keep it inside my phone and I don't want to use paper for that because it's it's a bit awkward.

✓ But for the shopping list and everything, I like to keep it inside my phone, and I don't want to use paper for that because it's a bit awkward.

The phrase 'the shopping list and everything' needs a preposition 'for' to be correct. Also, the repeated 'it's' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'it's'.