List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些不完整，且部分表达不够自然。建议注意句子完整性，避免断句，使用更连贯的表达方式。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I find it hard to remember everything. For example, my parents often ask me to buy various kinds of vegetables, and some of them have unfamiliar names, so a list helps me avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强时态和句子结构的准确性，同时使内容更具体和连贯。

例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because I have many tasks to complete. For instance, three months ago, I had an eye exam scheduled in a week, so I created a study schedule to improve my efficiency and achieve a high grade.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和错误，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it takes too much time and feels boring. Therefore, they often ignore how important lists can be.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议注意介词和动词搭配，避免重复表达，同时使句子更自然流畅。

例: To be honest, I usually prefer making lists on paper because I've been doing it for 10 years. It feels like a hobby to me, and I enjoy the tactile sensation of touching the paper.

× I always make lists when I go shopping because I find it difficult for me to remember all the things.

✓ I always make lists when I go shopping because I find it difficult to remember all the things.

句中“for me to remember”结构多余，应该直接用不定式“to remember”，使句子更简洁通顺。

× For example, when my parents asked me to buy different kinds of vegetables.

✓ For example, when my parents ask me to buy different kinds of vegetables.

此句为不完整句，缺少主句，且时态应与上下文保持一致，改为一般现在时“ask”并补充完整句子。

× And it also has some different names so it's easy for me to forget them.

✓ They also have different names, so it's easy for me to forget them.

句子主语不明确，使用“it”指代不清，应改为复数“they”指代“vegetables”，使主谓一致。

× The main reason is that I have a lot of work needs to do.

✓ The main reason is that I have a lot of work to do.

“work needs to do”结构错误，应改为“work to do”，表示“需要做的工作”。

× For example, three months ago I have an eye exam in one week, so I need to make a a study schedule to help me to improve my working efficiency and get a high grade.

✓ For example, three months ago I had an eye exam in one week, so I needed to make a study schedule to help me improve my working efficiency and get a high grade.

时间状语“three months ago”表示过去，动词时态应使用过去时“had”和“needed”，且“a a”重复，应删除一个。

× I think the main reason is that the students think making a list need to spend a lot of time and I he think it's unavailable and boring, so they always ignore its importance from make a list.

✓ I think the main reason is that students think making a list needs to spend a lot of time and they think it's unavailable and boring, so they always ignore its importance in making a list.

“a list need”主谓不一致，应为“needs”；“I he think”人称错误，应为“they think”；“from make a list”介词用法错误，应为“in making a list”。

× I think the main reason is that the students think making a list need to spend a lot of time and I he think it's unavailable and boring, so they always ignore its importance from make a list.

✓ I think the main reason is that students think making a list needs to spend a lot of time and they think it's unavailable and boring, so they always ignore its importance in making a list.

“from make a list”中的介词“from”用错，应改为“in”，且“make”应改为动名词“making”。

× I think the main reason is that the students think making a list need to spend a lot of time and I he think it's unavailable and boring, so they always ignore its importance from make a list.

✓ I think the main reason is that students think making a list needs to spend a lot of time and they think it's unavailable and boring, so they always ignore its importance in making a list.

句中“ I he think”是人称代词错误，应统一为“they think”。

× I like to talk to the touch the paper and I love its feeling.

✓ I like to touch the paper and I love its feeling.

“talk to the touch the paper”结构错误，应删除“talk to”，直接用“touch the paper”。