List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, sometimes I write down everything that I need to buy when I have a tight budget so that I won't go and buy, uh, the stuff that I don't need and go out of my budget.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Absolutely, yes, I do write down everything that I need to do umm, for instance, umm, before the week starts, I always write down everything that I need to do and complete this week. So it really helps me to organize my time.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I don't really know this kind of people, but from my point of view it depends on the person. Maybe for some people it's easy to remember everything in their head, but for others it can be hard so they write everything down. So yeah, I think it depends more on the person person's traits.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I'm a religion person and I do everything on my phone as well as writing down a list. I cannot imagine my life now without my phone because I do everything, umm, that's possible on my phone. So yeah.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Жауабыңыз табиғи және түсінікті, бірақ "uh" сияқты толтырғыш сөздерді азайтыңыз және сөйлемдерді қысқартуға тырысыңыз. Мысалы, артық сөздерді алып тастап, жауапты 3-4 сөйлемге дейін қысқартсаңыз, жауап тиімді әрі нақты болады.
例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list when I have a tight budget. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and stay within my budget.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ "umm" сияқты толтырғыш сөздерді азайтыңыз және сөйлемдерді біршама қысқартсаңыз, жауап одан да табиғи болады. Сонымен қатар, байланыстырушы сөздерді қолдану арқылы жауапты логикалық түрде жақсартыңыз.
例: Yes, I always write down my tasks before the week starts. This helps me organize my time effectively and complete everything on schedule.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 70.0提案: Жауабыңызда қайталаулар бар және кейбір сөйлемдер ұзақ. Мысалы, "person person's traits" деген қайталанған сөзді түзетіңіз. Сонымен қатар, жауапты нақты әрі қысқа етіп, байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз.
例: I think it depends on the person. Some people can easily remember things, so they don't need lists, while others prefer writing everything down to avoid forgetting.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: Жауабыңызда мағынасы түсініксіз сөз тіркестері бар, мысалы, "I'm a religion person" дегенді нақтылаңыз немесе түзетіңіз. Толтырғыш сөздерді азайтып, жауапты нақты әрі қысқа етіп беріңіз.
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it for almost everything. It helps me stay organized and I can't imagine managing tasks without it.
文法
× I don't really know this kind of people, but from my point of view it depends on the person.
✓ I don't really know these kinds of people, but from my point of view it depends on the person.
The phrase 'this kind of people' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and 'people' is plural. The correct plural form is 'these kinds of people' to match the plural noun 'people'.
× So yeah, I think it depends more on the person person's traits.
✓ So yeah, I think it depends more on the person's traits.
The phrase 'person person's traits' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'person's traits' to indicate possession by a singular person.
× I'm a religion person and I do everything on my phone as well as writing down a list.
✓ I'm a religious person and I do everything on my phone as well as writing down a list.
The word 'religion' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the person. The correct adjective is 'religious'.
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