List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有重复的词语，显得不够自然。建议回答时简洁明了，避免重复，同时可以补充具体原因来丰富内容。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it difficult to organize my thoughts that way. As a result, I sometimes forget to buy important items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find it troublesome. Instead, I try to remember tasks mentally, but sometimes this makes my work less organized.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子流畅。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and inconvenient, just like me.

提案: 回答较为自然，但可以增加细节说明为什么手机更方便，使用连接词使表达更完整。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient to add and check items anytime. Also, I can easily edit the list without wasting paper.

× Maybe because because because of this I always forget to buy something.

✓ Maybe because of this, I always forget to buy something.

句中重复使用了because，且because后面应直接跟原因，不能重复使用because。应简化为because of this。

× I always used to memory my work in my brain so I always do my work randomly.

✓ I always used to memorize my work in my brain, so I always do my work randomly.

动词memory是名词，正确动词形式应为memorize，表示记忆。

× I think there are many reasons may may the people who don't like making this think it's a hassle for them to making to make a list like me.

✓ I think there are many reasons why people who don't like making lists think it's a hassle for them to make a list like me.

句中多次重复may，且缺少连接词why，且making this应为making lists，to making to make应改为to make。

× I like to make a list on my phone because I think for me it's convenient to note and check.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because I think it's convenient for me to note and check.

介词短语顺序错误，应为convenient for me，而不是for me it's convenient。