List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I always making' nên là 'I always make') và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

例: Definitely, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget items I need. However, if I don't have enough time to prepare a list, I usually just buy whatever I remember at the supermarket.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'I always making' nên là 'I always make'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và có sự liên kết giữa các ý để tăng tính mạch lạc.

例: Definitely, I always make a list of assignments that teachers give at school. This helps me remember my tasks and complete my homework even after a long day. Overall, making lists definitely improves my productivity.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: 'too much too much'). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they feel they don't have enough time, and others think it's unnecessary.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'prefer to match a list', 'in my phone is have numerous F'). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đúng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Absolutely, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it has many useful features and is very convenient. However, if I forget my phone at home, I usually write the list on paper.

× Definitely, I always making a list when I go shopping because I always forget items that I want to buy.

✓ Definitely, I am always making a list when I go shopping because I always forget items that I want to buy.

The verb 'making' needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense. 'I always making' is incorrect; it should be 'I am always making' to indicate a habitual action in present continuous tense.

× However, if I don't have enough time to making a list, I often go to the supermarket and buy anything that I remember.

✓ However, if I don't have enough time to make a list, I often go to the supermarket and buy anything that I remember.

After 'to' (a preposition or part of an infinitive), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'to making' is incorrect; it should be 'to make'.

× Definitely, I always making a list for assignments that teacher give for students at school.

✓ Definitely, I am always making a list for assignments that the teacher gives to students at school.

Again, 'I always making' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form present continuous tense. Also, 'teacher give' needs correction to 'the teacher gives' for subject-verb agreement and article use.

× Definitely, I always making a list for assignments that teacher give for students at school.

✓ Definitely, I am always making a list for assignments that the teacher gives to students at school.

The noun 'teacher' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific teacher. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher'.

× Definitely, I always making a list for assignments that teacher give for students at school.

✓ Definitely, I am always making a list for assignments that the teacher gives to students at school.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating the recipient of the assignments.

× Overall making at least definitely improve my productivity.

✓ Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity at least.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. Adding 'a list' clarifies the subject, and 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. The adverb 'definitely' is better placed before the verb.

× In my opinion, the main reason that some people don't like making this because they don't have too much too much time to do and some people think it's unnecessary for them.

✓ In my opinion, the main reason that some people don't like making lists is because they don't have much time to do it, and some people think it's unnecessary for them.

'Making this' is unclear; 'making lists' is more appropriate. 'Too much too much time to do' is redundant and incorrect; 'much time to do it' is correct. Also, the sentence was missing the verb 'is' after 'reason'.

× In my opinion, the main reason that some people don't like making this because they don't have too much too much time to do and some people think it's unnecessary for them.

✓ In my opinion, the main reason that some people don't like making lists is because they don't have much time to do it, and some people think it's unnecessary for them.

The pronoun 'it' is needed to refer back to 'making lists'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete.

× Absolutely, I prefer to match a list on my phone because in my phone is have numerous F and I think it's very convenient.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone has numerous features and I think it's very convenient.

'Match a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. 'In my phone is have numerous F' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my phone has numerous features'. The preposition 'on' is correct for 'make a list on my phone'.

× Absolutely, I prefer to match a list on my phone because in my phone is have numerous F and I think it's very convenient.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone has numerous features and I think it's very convenient.

The verb 'match' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'make' when referring to creating a list.

× However, if I forgot my phone at home, I often use a paper to list the thing that I need to buy.

✓ However, if I forget my phone at home, I often use paper to list the things that I need to buy.

'If I forgot' should be 'if I forget' to match the present tense conditional. 'Use a paper' is incorrect; 'use paper' is the correct expression. 'The thing' should be plural 'the things' to match the context.