List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“don't like make a list”应为“don't like to make a list”，同时表达不够简洁自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: No, I don't like to make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse freely and choose gifts that seem suitable or appealing to me.

提案: 回答中语法和表达混乱，句子不连贯，难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用清晰的逻辑连接词表达观点。

例: I sometimes make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks, but I often find it hard to follow it strictly.

提案: 回答重复且表达不够准确，建议避免重复使用相同词汇，尝试用更具体的理由和连贯的句子表达观点。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by rules and prefer to be more spontaneous.

提案: 句子结构不完整且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并明确比较纸质和手机列表的优缺点，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to see everything clearly, and I feel more free to write and organize my thoughts compared to using my phone.

× No, I don't like make a list when I shop because I want to shop more freely and I like try to see the face gifts suitable for me or which is more favorable.

✓ No, I don't like making a list when I shop because I want to shop more freely and I like to try to see the face gifts suitable for me or which is more favorable.

动词后面接动名词或不定式时，'like'后面应接动名词'making'或不定式'to make'，这里用'making'更自然。

× No, I don't like make a list when I shop because I want to shop more freely and I like try to see the face gifts suitable for me or which is more favorable.

✓ No, I don't like making a list when I shop because I want to shop more freely and I like to try to see the face gifts suitable for me or which is more favorable.

'like'后面接动词时，'try'应使用不定式'to try'，表示尝试做某事。

× Well, for this kind of question, actually I have a very strong expression because when I make a list from my work, actually I think that's very pretty and very excited.

✓ Well, for this kind of question, actually I have a very strong expression because when I make a list for my work, actually I think that's very pretty and very exciting.

'excited'是形容人的情绪，描述事物时应使用形容词'exciting'。

× Well, for this kind of question, actually I have a very strong expression because when I make a list from my work, actually I think that's very pretty and very excited.

✓ Well, for this kind of question, actually I have a very strong expression because when I make a list for my work, actually I think that's very pretty and very exciting.

'make a list from my work'中介词'from'用法不当，应改为'for'表示为工作制作清单。

× But actually when I follow that, I think I cannot follow for it.

✓ But actually when I follow that, I think I cannot follow it.

'follow'后不需要介词'for'，直接接宾语即可。

× I think because they may think that it may be a trouble for them because they don't like some words to restrict them.

✓ I think because they may think that it may be trouble for them because they don't like some rules to restrict them.

'a trouble'用法错误，'trouble'是不可数名词，不加冠词；'words'改为'rules'更符合语境。

× I would prefer make a list on paper because that is a quite beneficial for paper which can make me to see more clearly and I can think I can more freely to get the paper on my phone.

✓ I would prefer making a list on paper because that is quite beneficial for me; paper can help me see more clearly and think more freely, which I cannot do on my phone.

'prefer'后应接动名词'making'；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× I would prefer make a list on paper because that is a quite beneficial for paper which can make me to see more clearly and I can think I can more freely to get the paper on my phone.

✓ I would prefer making a list on paper because that is quite beneficial for me; paper can help me see more clearly and think more freely, which I cannot do on my phone.

'beneficial for paper'用法错误，应为'beneficial for me'，表示对我有益。

× I would prefer make a list on paper because that is a quite beneficial for paper which can make me to see more clearly and I can think I can more freely to get the paper on my phone.

✓ I would prefer making a list on paper because that is quite beneficial for me; paper can help me see more clearly and think more freely, which I cannot do on my phone.

'which can make me to see'中'which'指代不清，且'to see'不需要不定式to，应改为'help me see'。