List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中时态使用不准确，句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并且避免重复和冗长。

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I go to the supermarket when I have free time and just buy what I need at the moment.

提案: 回答中时态混用且表达不够清晰，建议使用现在时描述习惯，句子结构要简洁，避免重复。

例: I usually make a to-do list at school to keep track of my tasks. It works most of the time, but sometimes I don't follow it because I feel lazy or something unexpected happens.

提案: 语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的主谓一致和连词，使表达更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously and don't want to be restricted by a list. Also, sometimes they don't have specific tasks to write down.

提案: 回答较长且有重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists. Using an app helps me remember tasks and sends reminders.

× Usually when I went to the shop or like supermarket something I seldom make a list for me because I would went there when I was boring or when I was free.

✓ Usually when I go to the shop or supermarket, I seldom make a list for myself because I would go there when I am bored or when I am free.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时，描述习惯动作，所以动词应使用一般现在时。'went' 应改为 'go'，'would went' 应改为 'would go'。另外，'boring' 应改为 'bored'，表示人的感受。

× I usually just walk by and walk inside for like I need to find something when.

✓ I usually just walk by and walk inside when I need to find something.

句子结构混乱，'for like' 不合适，应删除，句尾 'when' 应放在合适位置，形成完整句子。

× Well I I usually make a list when I was in school and need to make A to do list for me to check which I have finished everything I need to do.

✓ Well, I usually made a list when I was in school and needed to make a to-do list for myself to check if I had finished everything I needed to do.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时，'make' 改为 'made'，'need' 改为 'needed'，'have finished' 改为 'had finished'，保持时态一致。

× But it does work sometimes but doesn't work and and some maybe I was lazy or something happened.

✓ But it works sometimes, and sometimes it doesn't work because maybe I was lazy or something happened.

'does work' 应改为 'works' 以符合第三人称单数，句子连接词使用不当，需调整使句子通顺。

× Some people doesn't like making lists because maybe they want to do something they want at the moment, they don't like to follow the least or they didn't think of anything to write on the list that he or she must do today.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because maybe they want to do something they want at the moment, they don't like to follow the list, or they don't think of anything to write on the list that they must do today.

'Some people' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'don't'，而非 'doesn't'。另外，'least' 应为 'list'。

× Some people doesn't like making lists because maybe they want to do something they want at the moment, they don't like to follow the least or they didn't think of anything to write on the list that he or she must do today.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because maybe they want to do something they want at the moment, they don't like to follow the list, or they don't think of anything to write on the list that they must do today.

句中 'he or she' 与前文复数 'some people' 不一致，应使用复数代词 'they'。

× I prefer making a list on my phone because maybe sometimes I write on a paper I will I will lose the paper and can't find it that but I can't remember all the things on the list.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because sometimes when I write on paper, I will lose it and can't find it, and I can't remember all the things on the list.

'write on a paper' 应为 'write on paper'，'that' 用法不当，应删除或调整句子结构。

× So I prefer I can write on my phone or type in some app that can always remind me to do the thing.

✓ So I prefer to write on my phone or type in some app that can always remind me to do things.

'I prefer I can write' 结构不正确，应改为 'I prefer to write'。'the thing' 应改为复数 'things'，更符合语境。