List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的短语，如"make a list"，并且回答时应更直接和简洁。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如"get more concentrate"应为"concentrate more"，"it always work"应为"it always works"。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性。

例: Yes, I always make a list at work because it helps me concentrate better and know exactly what tasks I need to complete, so it always works well.

提案: 回答中重复词语较多，语法错误明显，如"making this aren't really important"。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的语法。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to enjoy life spontaneously and go with the flow, so lists are not important to them.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议分句表达，使用正确的时态和连接词，使回答更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on paper, especially for work. However, in daily life, like when I'm on the bus, I use my phone to note down ideas that come to me.

× No, I usually don't make this when I go to the shop.

✓ No, I usually don't make one when I go to the shop.

这里的'this'用法不正确，应该用'one'来指代'list'，因为'this'通常指具体的事物，而'one'用来代替前面提到的可数名词。

× Yes, I think I always make a list when I'm in a work situation because it helps me to get more concentrate and know what I'm going to do and it always work.

✓ Yes, I think I always make a list when I'm in a work situation because it helps me to concentrate more and know what I'm going to do, and it always works.

'get more concentrate'中的'concentrate'应为动词'concentrate'，前面加副词'more'，应改为'concentrate more'。此外，'it always work'主谓不一致，'work'应加第三人称单数形式's'。

× it always work.

✓ it always works.

主语是单数第三人称'situation'或'it'，谓语动词应加's'，保持主谓一致。

× I think I think some people don't like to make a list like they enjoy every moment in their life.

✓ I think some people don't like to make a list because they enjoy every moment of their life.

'like'用法不当，应使用'because'引导原因状语从句；'in their life'应改为'of their life'，表示'生命中的每一刻'。

× Just go with the flow and and know what they're going to do.

✓ They just go with the flow and know what they're going to do.

句子缺少主语，应补充主语'they'，使句子完整。

× So making this aren't really aren't really important for them.

✓ So making this isn't really important for them.

'making this'是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式'isn't'，而不是复数形式'aren't'。

× I prefer making this on paper, usually for work and not something on my cell phone is in daily life like I'm taking the bus.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper, usually for work, and not using my cell phone in daily life, like when I'm taking the bus.

'this'用法不当，应改为复数形式'lists'；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰；'is in daily life'不合适，应改为'in daily life'。

× I have come up some idea I will take it on the phone.

✓ If I come up with some ideas, I will note them on my phone.

原句缺少连词，且表达不完整，应使用条件句结构'If I come up with...'，并且'idea'应为复数'ideas'，'take it on the phone'表达不准确，应改为'note them on my phone'。