List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to add more specific details and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, explain why making a list is useful and how it helps you during shopping.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need. Moreover, it saves time since I can quickly find everything without wandering around the store.

提案: Your answer is a bit repetitive and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to provide a more structured response with specific reasons.

例: I sometimes make a list for my work because it motivates me and helps me stay organized. However, when I'm in a hurry, I skip making a list and start working directly to save time.

提案: Your answer seems to explain why people like making lists rather than why some dislike them. Try to directly address the question and provide specific reasons with linking words.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to be spontaneous. Additionally, they might feel restricted by a list and enjoy flexibility in their tasks.

提案: Good explanation, but try to improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid minor errors.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone often distracts me with other apps and the internet. However, if I don't have paper nearby, I use my phone to make a list for convenience.

× I prefer to straight go to the work.

✓ I prefer to go straight to work.

The phrase 'to straight go' is incorrect because the adverb 'straight' should come after the verb 'go' or before the verb phrase. Also, 'the work' is incorrect here because 'work' as an uncountable noun does not need the definite article 'the' when referring to one's job or place of work. The correct phrase is 'go straight to work.'

× But if I don't have paper clothes or near me, I just make list on my phone.

✓ But if I don't have paper or clothes near me, I just make a list on my phone.

The original sentence has a misplaced phrase 'paper clothes' which is confusing. It likely meant 'paper or clothes.' Also, 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list.' The phrase 'near me' should come after the nouns it modifies. The corrected sentence is 'But if I don't have paper or clothes near me, I just make a list on my phone.'