List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and contains grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, for example, say 'Usually, I don't make a list because I remember what I need to buy and just go shopping.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Usually, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I can remember the items I need. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I recall. However, for bigger shopping trips, I sometimes jot down important items to avoid forgetting them.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by clearer sentence structure and linking words. Use linking phrases like 'However' or 'But' to connect ideas. Also, correct grammar such as 'priorities which come without reminders' and 'my list becomes secondary to priorities.'

例: I sometimes make lists for my work, but often urgent tasks come up without reminders. Therefore, I have to adjust my priorities accordingly. As a result, my list sometimes becomes less important compared to immediate tasks.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. For example, say 'Some people avoid making lists because they prefer to work flexibly according to the situation. They may think making lists wastes time.' Avoid vague phrases like 'work a card' and improve sentence coherence.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and handle tasks as they come. They might feel that making lists takes too much time and limits their ability to adapt to changing situations.

提案: Your answer shows your preference but is unclear and has many hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and use correct grammar. For example, say 'I prefer the old-fashioned way and like to write my lists by hand in a diary. Writing helps me remember tasks better and organize my thoughts clearly.'

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things more effectively. When I write my tasks in a diary, I can organise my thoughts clearly and plan what to do and when.

× I remember things what I need to purchase and I just go and purchase.

✓ I remember the things that I need to purchase and I just go and purchase.

The pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'that' to refer to 'things'. Using 'that' correctly connects the clause to the noun it describes.

× For work also I tried to make lists sometimes but there are so many priorities which comes without reminders, so I have to work on the priorities.

✓ For work also I tried to make lists sometimes but there are so many priorities which come without reminders, so I have to work on the priorities.

The subject 'priorities' is plural, so the verb should be 'come' instead of 'comes' to agree in number.

× I think some people don't make lists because of their behavior issues because people work a card according to their I mean need or understanding.

✓ I think some people don't make lists because of their behavior issues because people work according to their, I mean, need or understanding.

The phrase 'work a card' is incorrect and unclear; it seems to be a misuse of pronouns and idiomatic expression. Removing 'a card' clarifies the sentence and corrects pronoun usage.

× I'm picked old school in this and I prefer to make a list in my diary page with my I mean hand, hand WH, which is, I mean, uh, help me to remind things.

✓ I'm old school in this and I prefer to make a list in my diary page with my hand, which helps me to remember things.

The phrase 'I'm picked old school' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm old school'. Also, 'help me to remind things' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to remember things'. The pronoun and verb forms are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× When I make list, I, uh, usually get clear thoughts that what I have to do and when I have to do so I prefer make list on the paper.

✓ When I make a list, I usually get clear thoughts about what I have to do and when I have to do it, so I prefer to make a list on paper.

The sentence lacked articles ('a list'), had awkward phrasing ('get clear thoughts that what'), and missing prepositions and infinitive forms ('prefer to make'). Correcting these improves sentence structure and clarity.