List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意动词时态和搭配，如“avoid forgetting”而非“avoid forget”，并避免使用“by the way”这种口语化且不太合适的连接词。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid forgetting important items. However, sometimes I end up buying extra things as well.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“in the night”应为“at night”，“stuff”较口语化且不够具体，最后一句不完整。建议使用完整句子并丰富细节。

例: I often make a list at night for the next day to organize the tasks I need to complete in the morning, afternoon, and evening. This helps me stay focused and manage my time effectively.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且用词不准确。建议简化表达，使用更自然的句型，并注意语法，如“dislike being stuck”而非“dislike to be stuck”。

例: Some people may dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom, or they prefer to rely on their memory to remember important tasks and complete them on time.

提案: 回答内容清晰，但存在语法错误，如“lost”应为“lose”，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议分句表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I might lose paper lists by accident. Also, it's easier to modify the list frequently on my phone.

× I would like to make a list for the shopping activity to avoid forget something important to buy.

✓ I would like to make a list for the shopping activity to avoid forgetting something important to buy.

动词avoid后应接动名词形式forgetting，而不是动词原形forget。

× I often make a list in the night for the next day.

✓ I often make a list at night for the next day.

表示时间时，night前应使用介词at，而不是in。

× So by this way I can.

✓ So by this way, I can do it.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整，应补充完整谓语。

× I think maybe they dislike to be stuck in a cage in their daily life and they maybe can remember all the important things in their mind and to do it in the proper time.

✓ I think maybe they dislike being stuck in a cage in their daily life and maybe they can remember all the important things in their mind and do them at the proper time.

动词dislike后应接动名词being，而不是不定式to be；另外，表达“做某事”时，后面不需要to do，直接用动词原形do。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I write something important which I want to do on the paper, maybe I will lost this paper by accident and on my phone I can modify it frequently.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I write something important which I want to do on paper, maybe I will lose this paper by accident and on my phone I can modify it frequently.

表示“在纸上”时，通常用介词on paper而不是on the paper；另外，动词lose拼写错误，应为lose。