List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（例えば、"I use smartphone app"は"I use a smartphone app"が正しい）を修正し、より流暢で効果的な表現を心がけましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより論理的になります。

例: Yes, I do make a list when I shop because sometimes I forget what I need to buy. Nowadays, I use a smartphone app to note down items, which is very convenient. In the past, I used to write my list on paper, but the app is easier to update.

提案: 回答は明確で内容も具体的ですが、冠詞の使い方（"A to do list"は"a to-do list"）や文のつなぎ方を改善するとより自然になります。接続詞を使って理由や結果を明確に示しましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work, and it works very well. Sometimes, when I'm busy, I get confused and forget some tasks. Therefore, making a to-do list helps me complete my tasks by the deadline.

提案: 文法の誤り（"might be lead"は"might lead"）を直し、理由をより具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開してください。

例: I'm not sure about the exact reason, but if I were someone who didn't like making lists, I might focus on one thing too much, which could lead to missing some important information.

提案: "smartphone apps"は単数形の"a smartphone app"に直し、最後の"forget to bling"は意味が不明瞭なので明確にしましょう。さらに、接続詞を使って理由をつなげると良いです。

例: I prefer to make a list on a smartphone app because it's very convenient and portable. Also, it's easy to update or remove items whenever I need. If I wrote my list on paper, I might sometimes forget to bring it with me.

× Nowadays I use smartphone app to make a note.

✓ Nowadays I use a smartphone app to make a note.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'smartphone app'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× In the past I write down these items on paper.

✓ In the past I wrote down these items on paper.

The sentence refers to a past action, so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Write' is present tense; the correct past tense form is 'wrote'.

× I usually make A to do list for my work and it works very well.

✓ I usually make a to-do list for my work and it works very well.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be correct.

× Sometimes I get confused and forget some tasks to do when I'm busy.

✓ Sometimes I get confused and forget some tasks to do when I'm busy.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain errors from the provided list.

× Making A to do list helps me complete my tasks by deadline.

✓ Making a to-do list helps me complete my tasks by the deadline.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'by deadline' requires the definite article 'the' before 'deadline'.

× This might be lead to missing some important information.

✓ This might lead to missing some important information.

The verb 'be' is unnecessary here. 'Might' is a modal verb followed directly by the base form of the verb 'lead'. Removing 'be' corrects the sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on my smartphone apps because it's very convenient and portable.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my smartphone app because it's very convenient and portable.

The singular noun 'a list' should correspond with the singular 'smartphone app', not plural 'apps'.

× If I were to write down on paper, sometimes I forget to bling.

✓ If I were to write down on paper, sometimes I forget to bring it.

The word 'bling' is incorrect; the intended word is 'bring'. Also, adding 'it' clarifies what is being forgotten.