List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "I always make a list or whenever my mom told me" which is confusing. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words like "for example" more smoothly and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, be careful with verb forms and sentence structure to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I make lists for my studies, which help me stay focused and organized. For example, while preparing for my IELTS exam, my list helps me prioritize tasks so I don't waste time wondering what to do next.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "can be still focused in a very covered place." Try to be more specific and use clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to explain your reasoning more logically.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can stay focused without writing things down. Therefore, they don't feel the need to prioritize making lists.

提案: Your answer is too long, unclear, and contains many grammatical errors. Try to keep your answer concise and clear, directly stating your preference and briefly explaining why. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because once I lost a paper list on the way to the supermarket, and since I have a poor memory, using my phone helps me avoid forgetting items.

× I always create a list for my studies and it helps me to stay focused and organize.

✓ I always create a list for my studies and it helps me to stay focused and organized.

The word 'organize' should be in the past participle form 'organized' to correctly function as an adjective describing the state of being focused and organized. Using 'organize' (base form) here is incorrect.

× I don't have I don't and I was not that good at memorizing thing that's why I don't.

✓ I don't have it and I am not that good at memorizing things, that's why I don't.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'I don't have'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. The verb tense 'was' should be 'am' to match the present context. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Some people are too good at memorizing thing and can be still focused in a very covered place.

✓ Some people are too good at memorizing things and can still be focused in a very crowded place.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'covered place' is likely a mistake for 'crowded place', which makes more sense in context.