List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและคำที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น "want to need that I want to buy" ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและมีความหมายชัดเจน เช่น "because it helps me shop more efficiently by allowing me to quickly find the items I need."

例: Yes, I usually make a list on my phone because it helps me shop more efficiently. For example, I can quickly find the items I need, which saves me time and effort.

提案: คำตอบของคุณดีแล้ว แต่ควรใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมและปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น "because it helps me organize and prioritize my daily tasks. For example, by writing down everything I need to do, I can manage my time more efficiently." เพื่อให้คำตอบมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize and prioritize my daily tasks. For example, by writing down everything I need to do, I can manage my time more efficiently.

提案: คำตอบนี้ไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรปรับปรุงให้ชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างที่ดีขึ้น เช่น "Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel that making lists is unnecessary."

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel that making lists is unnecessary.

提案: คำตอบนี้ไม่สมบูรณ์และมีคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น ควรพูดให้ชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์ เช่น "I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to access and manage, and sometimes I don't have paper with me."

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to access and manage, and sometimes I don't have paper with me.

× Yes, I usually make a list on my phone because it help me shop or shop more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list on my phone because it helps me shop more efficiently.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule for present simple tense.

× For example, I can quickly find the item that I want to need that I want to buy.

✓ For example, I can quickly find the item that I want to buy.

The phrase 'that I want to need that I want to buy' is redundant and confusing. Removing 'need that I want to' clarifies the sentence and corrects the structure.

× This way I set time and.

✓ This way, I save time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Set time and' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'save time', so the sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it help me organize and prioritize my daily tasks for example.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize and prioritize my daily tasks, for example.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, a comma is added before 'for example' for clarity.

× In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they can remember something they do and can manage an organized thing their task additional sum.

✓ In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they can remember what they need to do and can manage their tasks without a list.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect phrases like 'an organized thing their task additional sum'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to access and I can manage in uh, my hand and be uh, and sometimes I have not the paper in the.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to access and I can manage it in my hand, and sometimes I don't have paper with me.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains filler words 'uh' and unclear phrases. The correction removes fillers, completes the sentence, and clarifies the meaning.