List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子结构不够清晰，表达有些重复和冗长。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list, especially when I have limited time. This helps me buy everything I need quickly and efficiently.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it always works well. It helps me finish tasks on time and improves my efficiency.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子冗长且逻辑混乱。建议简化表达，明确观点，并用连接词组织句子。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do tasks spontaneously. They may also feel they don't have many things to do at once and can manage without a list.

提案: 回答较完整，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态和冠词使用，句子更简洁流畅。

例: Since graduating from university, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. However, when I was in junior and senior high school, I used to write lists on paper in my notebook.

× Yes, I always make a list when I have to go to shop, especially I have not very long time to go and make a list will make sure that I buy everything I need immediately and for the same time and I think it's more.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I have to go shopping, especially when I do not have very much time to go, and making a list will make sure that I buy everything I need immediately and at the same time, and I think it's better.

这里'shop'应改为动名词'shopping'表示购物活动；'not very long time'应改为'not very much time'，因为time是不可数名词；'for the same time'应为'at the same time'，表示同时发生；句子结构较复杂，适当调整使其更通顺。

× Yes, I also make a list for my work and it always work because make a list make sure that I can finish the work at the end time on time and it always let me work more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I also make a list for my work and it always works because making a list ensures that I can finish the work on time and it always lets me work more efficiently.

主语'it'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'变为'works'和'lets'；'make a list'应改为动名词'making a list'作为主语；'at the end time on time'表达不准确，改为'on time'更合适。

× Because I think maybe they prefer to do what they thought immediately at the particular time and they have, they think that they have not much things to do for the same time and they think they can do everything they have to.

✓ Because I think maybe they prefer to do what they think immediately at the particular time and they think that they do not have many things to do at the same time and they think they can do everything they have to.

'thought'应为现在时'think'，保持时态一致；'not much things'应为'not many things'，因为things是可数名词；'for the same time'应为'at the same time'。

× Nowadays, after my graduate from university, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me and not every time I want to make a list there is paper nearby.

✓ Nowadays, after my graduation from university, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me and not every time I want to make a list is there paper nearby.

'graduate'应为名词'graduation'；'not every time I want to make a list there is paper nearby'语序错误，倒装句应为'is there paper nearby'。

× But when I was a junior high and Senior High student, I always make this on paper on my book.

✓ But when I was a junior high and senior high student, I always made this on paper in my book.

'make'应为过去时'made'，因为描述过去的习惯；'on my book'应为'in my book'，表示在书里；'Senior High'首字母应小写'senior'。