List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然，但有些语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议避免重复表达，如“save some time in during the shopping”中“in during”重复。可以用更连贯的连接词来丰富答案。

例: No, I usually remember the items in my mind because it's quicker. However, I believe making a shopping list is a good habit since it helps save time while shopping.

提案: 回答中时态使用不够准确，句子结构较复杂且略显冗长。建议简化句子，使用更准确的时态，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I didn't use to make lists for work before July. However, after seeing my cousin use them efficiently, I started making lists and found them very helpful for managing my tasks.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“who don't like making lists”用法不当，重复词汇“I I”，时态和主谓一致错误。建议简化句子，注意语法和表达的准确性。

例: In the past, I didn't like making lists because they made me feel stressed and anxious. I was afraid I wouldn't be able to complete all my tasks.

提案: 回答较为自然，但最后一句不完整，缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can check them anytime and anywhere. Moreover, my phone reminds me to complete tasks, which helps me stay organized and efficient.

× it helps people save some time in during the shopping.

✓ it helps people save some time during the shopping.

这里的介词使用错误，'in during'是不正确的搭配，应去掉'in'，只用'during'表示在购物期间节省时间。

× Actually I hadn't made a list before July, but recently I have found that my cousin uses a list for work and it's efficient, so I use it and I find it helpful for work and management.

✓ Actually, I hadn't made a list before July, but recently I have found that my cousin uses a list for work and it's efficient, so I use it and find it helpful for work and management.

句子中时态使用基本正确，但逗号缺失，且'and I find it helpful'中第二个主语'I'可以省略，使句子更流畅。

× For me in the past who don't like making lists, it gave me more stress and anxiety because I I would afraid that I couldn't complete my task.

✓ For me in the past, who didn't like making lists, it gave me more stress and anxiety because I was afraid that I couldn't complete my task.

这里代词和时态使用错误，'who don't like'应改为过去时'didn't like'，'I I would afraid'中多余重复'I'且'would afraid'不正确，应改为'was afraid'。

× Besides, my phone can remind me of completing my tasks which helps me stay organized and not.

✓ Besides, my phone can remind me of completing my tasks, which helps me stay organized and not forget.

句子结尾不完整，缺少动词，'and not'应补充完整为'and not forget'，使句子完整且逻辑清晰。