List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법 오류를 줄이고 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 예를 들어, 'I don't make a list when I shop because I usually go without plans and enter the store immediately.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

例: I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously without planning in advance.

提案: 문장이 명확하지 않고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'It's pretty work' 대신 구체적인 효과를 설명하세요. 예를 들어, 'It helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.'

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

提案: 의미 전달이 불명확하고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 명확한 이유를 제시하고 문장을 완성하세요. 예: 'Some people may not like making lists because they don't see the benefit or find it unnecessary.'

例: Some people might not like making lists because they feel it's unnecessary or prefer to remember things without writing them down.

提案: 문법 오류를 수정하고 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 예: 'I prefer making lists on paper because it's more comfortable and doesn't require batteries.'

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's more comfortable for me and I don't have to worry about my phone's battery running out.

× No, I'm not make a list when I shop because when I go to the shop I don't have any plans and I just entered immediately, so I'm not make a list.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because when I go to the shop I don't have any plans and I just enter immediately, so I don't make a list.

The error is the incorrect use of 'I'm not make' which mixes present continuous with base verb form. The correct form is simple present 'I don't make' to express habitual action. Also, 'entered' should be 'enter' to match present tense context.

× Yes, I make a list when I work because if I have work I can follow the list and it's pretty work. So I always make a list when I work.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I work because if I have work I can follow the list and it works well. So I always make a list when I work.

The phrase 'it's pretty work' is incorrect; it should be 'it works well' to express that the list is effective. Also, 'make' is correct here as simple present tense for habitual action.

× I think they don't feel that why they have to make a list or. They don't feel.

✓ I think they don't understand why they have to make a list. They don't feel the need to do so.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Don't feel that why' is incorrect structure. The correction clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence properly.

× I prefer to make a list on paper. I have a little note, so I make a list as the notes. It is more comfortable and it don't need batteries.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper. I have a little notebook, so I make a list as notes. It is more comfortable and it doesn't need batteries.

'It don't need' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it doesn't need' for third person singular. Also, 'note' should be 'notebook' for clarity, and 'as the notes' is better as 'as notes'.