List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with clear sentences. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

例: I sometimes make a shopping list, but usually I prefer to shop without one because I don't always follow the list. However, this way I can be more flexible while shopping.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and check verb forms.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks because it helps me prioritize important things. When I have many tasks, the list keeps me organized and saves time.

提案: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid repeating words. Start with a topic sentence, then explain with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer flexibility and want to decide their tasks spontaneously. For example, I also like to be flexible rather than follow a strict list.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Avoid awkward phrases and be concise.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to carry and I won't lose it like paper lists. So, using my mobile is more convenient for me.

× I do some time listing about the shopping and groceries, whereas I prefer to go blank wherever I go because I do not follow the listing during my grocery shopping.

✓ I sometimes make a list about the shopping and groceries, whereas I prefer to go blank wherever I go because I do not follow the list during my grocery shopping.

The phrase 'do some time listing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'sometimes make a list' because 'sometimes' is an adverb of frequency and 'make a list' is the correct verb phrase. Also, 'listing' should be 'list' as a noun here.

× So I rather prefer not to list anything.

✓ So I prefer not to list anything.

The phrase 'rather prefer' is redundant. 'Prefer' alone is sufficient to express the meaning. Using both together is incorrect.

× Yes, I do make a list for my working tasks, whereas it's depend upon my mood.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my working tasks, whereas it depends upon my mood.

The verb 'depend' must agree with the singular subject 'it'. Therefore, 'depend' should be 'depends' in third person singular form.

× Also, if I have so many things to do, I'm obviously make a list so I can go as the importance of the things rather than go randomly and spontaneously.

✓ Also, if I have many things to do, I obviously make a list so I can prioritize the tasks rather than go randomly and spontaneously.

The phrase 'so many things' is acceptable but 'I'm obviously make' is incorrect; it should be 'I obviously make'. Also, 'go as the importance of the things' is unclear and corrected to 'prioritize the tasks' for clarity and correctness.

× I can spend my time.

✓ I can manage my time.

The phrase 'spend my time' is not incorrect but 'manage my time' fits better in the context of organizing tasks.

× In my view, some people doesn't like to make listing because they want to go flexible and have more more time to decide what to do and what not to do.

✓ In my view, some people don't like to make lists because they want to be flexible and have more time to decide what to do and what not to do.

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, 'make listing' should be 'make lists' and 'go flexible' should be 'be flexible'. The repeated word 'more more' is corrected to 'more'.

× So one of the person is me, so I like more flexible then go on the strict list.

✓ So one of those people is me, so I like to be more flexible than to follow a strict list.

'One of the person' is incorrect; it should be 'one of those people'. 'Like more flexible' should be 'like to be more flexible'. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'Go on the strict list' is corrected to 'follow a strict list'.

× For the listening thing I prefer to list on my phone because it's very easy and flexible to carry also whereas if I return in my paper I will lost that things.

✓ For listing, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very easy and flexible to carry. Also, if I rely on paper, I will lose those things.

'Listening thing' is incorrect; it should be 'listing'. 'List on my phone' is better as 'make a list on my phone'. 'Return in my paper' is incorrect; 'rely on paper' is correct. 'Lost that things' should be 'lose those things'.

× So I think I prefer on my mobile is very convenient.

✓ So I think I prefer using my mobile because it is very convenient.

The phrase 'prefer on my mobile' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer using my mobile'. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.