List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách khi đi mua sắm.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích cách bạn sử dụng danh sách để quản lý công việc hàng ngày.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and stay on schedule throughout the day.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ý và không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và logic hơn, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible, especially freelancers who have unpredictable schedules.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và giải thích rõ hơn lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để lập danh sách.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry it with me every day, so I can easily check my tasks. Also, I can quickly contact my coworkers if needed.

× Yes, of course. It helped me remember what I want, buy and give, save money.

✓ Yes, of course. It helps me remember what I want to buy, give, and save money.

The student used 'helped' which is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'helps' because the habit is ongoing. Also, 'what I want, buy and give' is unclear; it should be 'what I want to buy, give, and save money' for clarity and correct verb form.

× Yes, I usually make leave for my work because it helps me. What do I do and keep the plan in the day?

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me know what to do and keep my plan for the day.

The phrase 'make leave' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The sentence 'What do I do and keep the plan in the day?' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be rephrased to 'know what to do and keep my plan for the day' to convey the intended meaning.

× Because in the modern life, everyone likes more. It's a freelancer.

✓ Because in modern life, everyone likes freedom. They are freelancers.

'In the modern life' should be 'in modern life' without 'the'. 'Everyone likes more' is unclear; likely the student meant 'likes freedom' or 'likes flexibility'. 'It's a freelancer' is incorrect; it should be 'They are freelancers' to refer to people in plural.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone I bring every day and I can check very easy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I bring my phone every day and I can check it very easily.

The phrase 'my phone I bring every day' is awkward; the correct word order is 'I bring my phone every day'. 'Check very easy' should be 'check it very easily' to use the adverb form and include the object 'it'.

× And I can call in with my worker.

✓ And I can call my worker.

The phrase 'call in with my worker' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'call my worker' without 'in' or 'with'. 'Call in' is a phrasal verb meaning to phone in, but here it is unnecessary and incorrect.