List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为混乱，存在语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to prepare what I need. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my internship tasks. This helps me balance study and work, so I can complete tasks more efficiently.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇表达原因，并避免重复。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they have good memories or feel that lists limit their freedom to do things spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，建议简化表达，使用完整句子，并清楚说明理由。

例: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my phone because it allows me to set alarms and easily add or delete items.

× I always do some schedules or lists to prepare what I need to buy because if I didn't make a list maybe I will buy something non unnecessary and is a good way to save my money I think.

✓ I always make some schedules or lists to prepare what I need to buy because if I don't make a list, maybe I will buy something unnecessary, and it is a good way to save my money, I think.

这里'schedules'和'lists'是复数形式，动词应与之匹配，使用'make'更合适。'non unnecessary'是双重否定，应改为'unnecessary'。句子中缺少主语，'is a good way'应改为'it is a good way'。此外，时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时。

× because if I didn't make a list maybe I will buy something non unnecessary and is a good way to save my money I think.

✓ because if I don't make a list, maybe I will buy something unnecessary, and it is a good way to save my money, I think.

条件句中使用了过去时'didn't make'，但主句使用将来时'will buy'，时态不一致，应使用一般现在时'don't make'来表达真实条件。

× maybe I will do list and have a maintenance balance between study and work and I can I can do things more efficiently and.

✓ maybe I will make a list and maintain a balance between study and work, and I can do things more efficiently.

'do list'用法错误，应为'make a list'。'have a maintenance balance'表达不自然，应改为'maintain a balance'。句子末尾多余的'and'应删除。

× some people have good remember ability they can remember things clearly or other people may think is it is restrict extractive way for them because they want to do everything.

✓ some people have good memory; they can remember things clearly, or other people may think it is a restrictive and restrictive way for them because they want to do everything.

'remember ability'应改为'memory'，更符合表达习惯。'restrict extractive'用词错误，应为'restrictive'。句子结构不清晰，需调整。

× or other people may think is it is restrict extractive way for them because they want to do everything.

✓ or other people may think it is a restrictive way for them because they want to do everything.

句中' is it is'重复，应改为'it is'。代词使用错误，需简化句子使其通顺。

× I prefer choosing make list on my phone because it can help me set alarm and remind myself the second thing that I can add or add or delete items that's.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it can help me set alarms and remind me. The second thing is that I can add or delete items.

'prefer choosing make list'结构错误，应为'prefer making lists'。'set alarm'应为'set alarms'，复数形式。'remind myself'应为'remind me'。句子末尾不完整，需分句表达。