List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态，并简洁明了地表达观点，同时避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping to make sure I don't forget anything. It helps me stay organized and saves time.

提案: 回答中句子结构较为混乱，建议使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. When I arrive at the office, I list the most urgent tasks first, which helps me manage my time effectively.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并避免重复和语法错误。

例: Some people prefer not to make lists because they can remember their tasks mentally. They feel confident managing their priorities without writing them down.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，表达清晰且连贯。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's environmentally friendly and convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my tasks anytime.

× Yes, I always make a list when I was going to the shop that make sure I can't get to buy something.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go to the shop to make sure I don't buy something unnecessary.

这里的时间是现在习惯动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。'was going' 应改为 'go'。另外，句子中 'that make sure I can't get to buy something' 结构不正确，应改为 'to make sure I don't buy something unnecessary'。

× Yes, I always make a list when I was going to the shop that make sure I can't get to buy something.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go to the shop to make sure I don't buy something unnecessary.

这里需要使用不定式 'to make sure' 来表示目的，而不是使用 'that make'。

× I think the important things for every day when I come to my office, I must make a list that will show some immediate things and on urgent things I need to do first.

✓ I think the important things every day when I come to my office, I must make a list that will show some immediate things and urgent things I need to do first.

'on urgent things' 中 'on' 是多余的，应该去掉。

× So it's very work for me.

✓ So it works very well for me.

'very work' 不是正确的表达，应使用 'works very well' 来表达效果好。

× Maybe some people have the list. In his mind he don't need a list, the list on the paper or notebook.

✓ Maybe some people have the list in their mind. They don't need a list on paper or in a notebook.

'In his mind he don't' 主语和代词不一致，且动词形式错误，应改为 'they don't'。

× In his mind he don't need a list, the list on the paper or notebook.

✓ In his mind he doesn't need a list, the list on paper or in a notebook.

第三人称单数时，动词 'do' 应该用 'does'，否定形式为 'doesn't'。

× He just remember everything, one is urgent, one is an urgent and so on.

✓ He just remembers everything, some things are urgent, some are not urgent, and so on.

'one is urgent, one is an urgent' 表达不清且重复，应该用 'some things are urgent, some are not urgent'。

× So they don't usually to need a list.

✓ So they usually don't need a list.

'don't usually to need' 结构错误，'usually' 应放在助动词后，且 'to' 不应出现。

× Yes, I prefer to list her in my phone.

✓ Yes, I prefer to list it in my phone.

'list her' 中 'her' 用法错误，应该用 'it' 指代 'list'。

× It's very green, Greenway to remember everything.

✓ It's a very green, eco-friendly way to remember everything.

'Greenway' 不是正确的表达，应改为 'green, eco-friendly way'。

× Yes, uh, 'cause I take my phone every day.

✓ Yes, because I take my phone every day.

口语中 'cause' 是 'because' 的缩写，书面语应使用完整形式。

× If I've got some urgencies, I can see the list on my phone.

✓ If I have some urgent matters, I can see the list on my phone.

'urgencies' 用法不当，应该用 'urgent matters' 或 'urgent things'。

× It's very easy for me and remind me to do some.

✓ It's very easy for me and reminds me to do things.

主语 'It' 单数，谓语动词应为 'reminds'，且 'do some' 不完整，应补充 'things'。