List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Of course, because I actually I don't have a good memory every time if I don't make a list after going to the supermarket, I always forget something that I plan to buy. So to avoid this, I will always make a list before I go to the supermarket to remind me.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, because the list is very useful for me to make a clear plan and to know what I have already done and what I haven't done.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think maybe these people think that making a list is a waste of time and sometimes we they will not do things according to the list.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper because writing down things on the paper can make me remember it deeper and but if I record things on the mobile phones, I will just quickly forget it.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时语句较长且有重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时注意语法准确性。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because I tend to forget items if I don't. This helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time at the supermarket.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答较简洁，但缺少连接词和更具体的细节。建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，并举例说明清单如何帮助工作。
例: Yes, I use lists at work because they help me organize my tasks clearly. For example, I can track what I've completed and what still needs attention, which improves my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中出现语法错误和表达不清，建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性，同时提供更具体的原因和例子。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time, and sometimes they don't follow the list anyway, which makes the effort seem pointless.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和连接词使用不当，建议简化句子结构，正确使用连接词，并说明原因更具体。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me remember better. In contrast, if I use my phone, I tend to forget the tasks quickly.
文法
× I actually I don't have a good memory every time if I don't make a list after going to the supermarket, I always forget something that I plan to buy.
✓ I actually don't have a good memory. Every time if I don't make a list after going to the supermarket, I always forget something that I plan to buy.
句子中"I actually I don't have"重复使用了主语"I"，造成句子结构混乱，应去掉多余的"I"。
× I think maybe these people think that making a list is a waste of time and sometimes we they will not do things according to the list.
✓ I think maybe these people think that making a list is a waste of time and sometimes they will not do things according to the list.
句子中"we they"出现了两个主语代词，造成语法错误，应去掉多余的"we"。
× Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper because writing down things on the paper can make me remember it deeper and but if I record things on the mobile phones, I will just quickly forget it.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper because writing down things on the paper can help me remember them better, but if I record things on the mobile phone, I will just quickly forget them.
句子中"and but"连用，连接词重复，应去掉"and"。另外，"make me remember it deeper"表达不自然，改为"help me remember them better"更符合英语习惯。
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