List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear sentence structure. Try to make your response more concise and organized by using complete sentences and avoiding repeated words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and keeps me organized.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains some repetition and could be more concise. Try to combine sentences and use linking words to improve flow. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I do' and 'it helps' unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and remember my tasks. Although some people might not find lists useful, they work well for me.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to answer directly with clear reasons and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they are naturally disorganized or prefer a more flexible approach to tasks, unlike me who values organization.

提案: Your answer is understandable but includes filler words and is slightly repetitive. Try to give a clear preference or explain why you use both, using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone because if I forget the paper list, I can always check the app on my phone.

× Yes, I do they they are very important so you don't forget anything on the list you need and it's very much to help you to be organized.

✓ Yes, I do. They are very important so you don't forget anything on the list you need and they help you to be organized.

The original sentence incorrectly repeats 'they' and uses 'it's very much to help' which is ungrammatical. 'They' should be used once to refer to 'lists' (plural), and 'they help you to be organized' is the correct plural verb agreement. Also, 'it's very much to help' is incorrect; 'they help you' is the proper phrase.

× Yes I do. I do. At least for my work it helps. It helps me to be organized with my work and to help me remember everything I need to do. Does it work? Yes, it does for me. But some people may disagree with me so it depends on the person itself.

✓ Yes, I do. At least for my work, it helps. It helps me to be organized with my work and to remember everything I need to do. Does it work? Yes, it does for me. But some people may disagree with me, so it depends on the person.

The phrase 'depends on the person itself' is incorrect because 'itself' is a reflexive pronoun used for objects or animals, not people. The correct pronoun is 'the person' without 'itself'. Also, some minor punctuation corrections improve clarity.

× Uh, as I said in the past question, it depends on the person himself. Some persons or some people are not very well organized and a little messy. It's quite alright, but uh, I don't like that. I don't like that I'm very organized.

✓ Uh, as I said in the previous question, it depends on the person. Some people are not very well organized and a little messy. It's quite alright, but I don't like that. I'm very organized.

Using 'person himself' is unnecessary and can be considered awkward; 'the person' suffices. Also, 'some persons' is less common and 'some people' is preferred. The sentence 'I don't like that I'm very organized' is confusing; it should be 'I don't like that' and then 'I'm very organized' as a separate statement.

× Uh, I do both actually. So if I don't remember or if I forget the paper, I have a copy in my phone. So I'd say both, the app, both.

✓ Uh, I do both actually. So if I don't remember or if I forget the paper, I have a copy on my phone. So I'd say both, the app, both.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to having something on a device; the correct preposition is 'on' for phones or electronic devices.