List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear but a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, you can say: "Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time. Moreover, it keeps me focused on my shopping."

例: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time. Moreover, it keeps me focused on my shopping.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating words. For example, you can say: "Yes, when my schedule is hectic, I make a list of tasks to remember what I need to do. It definitely works well for me."

例: Yes, when my schedule is hectic, I make a list of tasks to remember what I need to do. It definitely works well for me.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct tenses and clearer vocabulary. Also, provide a more specific reason. For example: "Some people don't like making lists because they are not very punctual or they find it easy to remember tasks without writing them down."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not very punctual or they find it easy to remember tasks without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and avoid repeating words. For example: "I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I can set reminders that help me remember everything easily. This way, I stay organised and punctual. Therefore, using my phone is more beneficial than paper."

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I can set reminders that help me remember everything easily. This way, I stay organised and punctual. Therefore, using my phone is more beneficial than paper.

× So I prefer to make a list whenever I went for shopping.

✓ So I prefer to make a list whenever I go shopping.

The sentence uses 'went' which is past tense, but the context is about a habitual action, so present tense 'go' should be used instead.

× Yes, sometimes when I when I am busy my schedule is very hectic that at that time I make the list of my work also which helps me to remember the things which I want to do.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I am busy and my schedule is very hectic, at that time I also make a list of my work which helps me remember the things I want to do.

The sentence has redundant 'when I' and awkward phrasing. Also, 'make the list of my work also' is better as 'make a list of my work also'. The correction improves clarity and pronoun use.

× And yes it works definitely because it is the good good remember of the thing.

✓ And yes, it definitely works because it is a good way to remember things.

The phrase 'good good remember of the thing' is incorrect. It should be 'a good way to remember things' to correctly use adjectives and nouns.

× Some people didn't prefer to make the list because they are not the punctual of time and sometimes they they can remember easily things that what they want to do.

✓ Some people don't prefer to make lists because they are not punctual and sometimes they can easily remember the things they want to do.

'Didn't prefer' is past tense but the context is general, so present tense 'don't prefer' is correct. Also, 'the punctual of time' is incorrect; 'punctual' is an adjective and does not need 'the' or 'of time'.

× I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I set a reminder reminder with the making list that reminds me each and everything very easily and it helps me to be organised and the punctual punctual person of the time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I set a reminder with the list that reminds me of everything very easily and helps me to be organised and punctual.

The sentence has repeated words 'reminder reminder' and 'punctual punctual'. Also, 'the punctual person of the time' is incorrect; 'punctual' is an adjective and does not need 'the' or 'person of the time'. The correction removes redundancy and improves pronoun and adjective use.