List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
I often make a list when I have to buy something because when I go to the market, I always be obstructed by all the products that you sell and the promotions always catch my eye. So why?
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I make a list for my work every day. Even though I don't have a lot of tasks to do. This main job is learning English. I usually write down the topics or skills I want to practice each day. This help me organize and focus and finally makes a very effective in managing my study time.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Some people don't like making lists because they might feel that, uh, it restricts their freedom and spontaneity. They prefer to go with the flow instead of planning every detail on of the day. However, I think this is a mistake because making a list can help us stay organized and manage our time.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a lace on paper because I really enjoy the feeling of satisfaction when I take off each task. It gives me a sense of treatment and motivates me to move forward. Using paper also feels more personal and help me focus better than use my phone because the phone will track me by.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，且最后一句“so why?”不符合对话逻辑，显得多余。建议回答时注意语法正确，避免无意义的句子，并且回答应简洁明了。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because there are many products and promotions that can distract me, so the list helps me stay focused and buy only what I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答结构基本合理，但存在语法错误，如“This help me”应为“helps me”，且最后一句表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致和句子连贯性。
例: Yes, I make a list every day, mainly for my English learning. I write down the topics or skills I want to practice, which helps me stay organized and manage my study time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答内容较好，但有口语填充词“uh”，且“on of the day”应为“of the day”，建议减少口语填充词，注意表达准确。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and spontaneity. They prefer to go with the flow rather than plan every detail. However, I believe making lists helps us stay organized and manage time better.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误，如“lace”应为“list”，“take off”应为“tick off”，“sense of treatment”表达不当，句子不完整。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because ticking off each completed task gives me a great sense of satisfaction and motivation. Also, paper feels more personal and helps me focus better than using my phone, which can be distracting.
文法
× I always be obstructed by all the products that you sell and the promotions always catch my eye.
✓ I am always obstructed by all the products that you sell and the promotions always catch my eye.
这里的动词be应该用现在时态的am，因为主语是第一人称单数，表示现在的状态。
× This help me organize and focus and finally makes a very effective in managing my study time.
✓ This helps me organize and focus and finally is very effective in managing my study time.
主语This是单数，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps，makes后面缺少主语，应改为is very effective。
× They prefer to go with the flow instead of planning every detail on of the day.
✓ They prefer to go with the flow instead of planning every detail of the day.
介词短语中多了一个on，应去掉on，正确表达为planning every detail of the day。
× I prefer to make a lace on paper because I really enjoy the feeling of satisfaction when I take off each task.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I really enjoy the feeling of satisfaction when I take off each task.
单词lace应为list，lace是蕾丝，与语境不符。
× Using paper also feels more personal and help me focus better than use my phone because the phone will track me by.
✓ Using paper also feels more personal and helps me focus better than using my phone because the phone will track me.
help应加-s变为helps，比较结构中应使用动名词using my phone，句尾by多余，应去掉。
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