List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较简短，缺少具体细节和连贯的表达。建议在回答时增加一些具体原因或例子，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse and decide what I need spontaneously. However, sometimes I might forget important items if I don't plan ahead.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并补充具体细节说明清单的作用。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before going to work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important during the day.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. They prefer to remember their tasks mentally and feel confident without writing them down.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并补充具体原因使回答更完整。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily check and update my tasks anytime compared to using paper lists.

× Yes, I will make a list before to go to work.

✓ Yes, I will make a list before going to work.

这里“before”后面应该接动名词形式，表示在去工作之前做某事，不能直接接不定式“to go”。

× It's more easy to know what you are going to do and you will not forget something that you need to do.

✓ It's easier to know what you are going to do and you will not forget something that you need to do.

“more easy”是不正确的比较级形式，正确的比较级是“easier”。

× This kind of people that don't make a list may think making list is a wasting of time wasting of time things and they they just know what they need to do in their mind so they don't make a list.

✓ This kind of people who don't make a list may think making a list is a waste of time, and they just know what they need to do in their mind so they don't make a list.

“making list”缺少冠词，应为“making a list”；“a wasting of time wasting of time things”表达重复且错误，正确表达是“a waste of time”；“that”用于指人时应改为“who”。

× I prefer making a list in my on on my phone because you can check what your tasks more easier than making a list on paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because you can check your tasks more easily than making a list on paper.

“in my on on my phone”重复且错误，应为“on my phone”；“more easier”是错误的比较级形式，应为“more easily”作为副词修饰动词“check”。