List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "grocery market" and focus on using linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to vary your vocabulary a bit more.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because I often forget items, which forces me to make multiple trips. Therefore, having a list helps me shop more efficiently and saves time.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "a important" and "worked very drastically." Try to use correct articles and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I don't make lists every day, but before important meetings or presentations, I prepare a list of key tasks. This approach has definitely helped me stay organized and perform better.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some redundancy and awkward phrasing, such as "they they do not feel very convenient." Try to be more concise and use clearer expressions. Also, include linking words to improve coherence.

例: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they consider it time-consuming and prefer to be spontaneous, enjoying the freedom to explore things as they happen.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some minor errors and could be more concise. Avoid filler words like "Well definitely I Li" and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid ending sentences abruptly.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easier to edit than paper. Plus, I always carry my phone with me, so I never forget my list at home.

× Well, not every day, but whenever I have a important work meeting or a presentation, I like to make a list of most important things to do.

✓ Well, not every day, but whenever I have an important work meeting or a presentation, I like to make a list of the most important things to do.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'important'. Also, 'most important things' requires the definite article 'the' to specify particular things.

× Well, in my opinion, people who don't like to make a list think that it is a waste of time and they they do not feel very convenient to make a list and they are very adventurous to explore things as they come.

✓ Well, in my opinion, people who don't like to make a list think that it is a waste of time and they do not find it very convenient to make a list and they are very adventurous to explore things as they come.

The phrase 'they do not feel very convenient' is incorrect because 'convenient' describes things, not feelings. The correct expression is 'they do not find it very convenient'.

× Well definitely I Li like to make a list on my mobile phone because it is more convenient and easy to edit a list on my phone rather than on a paper so.

✓ Well, definitely I like to make a list on my mobile phone because it is more convenient and easier to edit a list on my phone rather than on paper.

The word 'easy' should be in comparative form 'easier' to compare editing on phone versus paper. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here and does not need an article. The typo 'Li' was removed.