List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为重复，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: I rarely make a shopping list because I trust my memory to remember what I need, so I find a list unnecessary.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并用连接词连接句子。

例: I often make lists for my work because they remind and motivate me when I feel unmotivated, so they are very effective.

提案: 回答中用词不够准确，且表达不够礼貌。建议使用更中性和具体的词汇，并丰富细节，使回答更自然。

例: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or think it's unnecessary for their routine.

提案: 回答较好，但句子断裂影响流畅性。建议合并句子，使用连接词，使表达更连贯自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because technology has advanced, making it more convenient than using paper.

× I rarely make a list when I am shopping because I think list is unnecessary for me because my memory is good enough to remember things I need to buy.

✓ I rarely make a list when I am shopping because I think a list is unnecessary for me because my memory is good enough to remember things I need to buy.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× Well, I often make a list for my work because a list can remind me and motivate me when I don't want to study and it so so it is very efficient for me and it does work.

✓ Well, I often make a list for my work because a list can remind me and motivate me when I don't want to study, so it is very efficient for me and it does work.

句子中“and it so so it”重复且结构混乱，应改为“so it”表示因果关系。

× Well, I think it's probably because they are lazy and some people might think making list is a kind of nerd things.

✓ Well, I think it's probably because they are lazy and some people might think making lists is a kind of nerd thing.

“making list”应为复数“making lists”，因为指的是一般的列表行为；“nerd things”应为单数“nerd thing”，表示一种类型的事物。

× Nowadays. Technology is becoming more and more advanced and making lists on my phone is much more convenient than making a list on paper.

✓ Nowadays, technology is becoming more and more advanced, and making lists on my phone is much more convenient than making a list on paper.

“Nowadays.”后面不应是句号，应为逗号连接后续句子，且首字母小写；句子中缺少逗号分隔并列句。