List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. This helps me remember essential items and avoid missing anything important.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议使用更连贯的句子并明确说明理由。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because tasks come from different sources and I can't finish them all at once. Making a list helps me remember everything and prioritize the most important tasks.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议完整表达观点并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful or restrictive, depending on their personality type.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达并更清晰地说明理由。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to see and I can stick it near my computer. Using electronic devices can be inconvenient since you have to unlock and open the app each time.

× I often do a list before I setting off to the shopping mall in case I forgot something to buy and which is essential for me like.

✓ I often make a list before I set off to the shopping mall in case I forget something essential to buy.

这里动词时态使用错误。'setting' 应该用动词原形 'set'，因为前面有助动词 'do'，且句子描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时。'forgot' 应改为 'forget'，保持时态一致。建议使用 'make a list' 而非 'do a list'，更符合英语习惯。

× I often do a list before I setting off to the shopping mall in case I forgot something to buy and which is essential for me like.

✓ I often make a list before I set off to the shopping mall in case I forget something essential to buy.

'setting off to the shopping mall' 中 'to' 用法不当，应该用 'set off for the shopping mall' 或直接 'set off to the shopping mall'，但更常用 'set off for'。这里简化为 'set off to' 也可接受。

× in case I forgot something to buy

✓ in case I forget something to buy

'in case' 后面应使用一般现在时表示将来可能发生的情况，'forgot' 是过去式，时态不匹配，应改为 'forget'。

× sometimes that your work is not just from one side and sometimes it could be from other side and you can't finish them at one time.

✓ sometimes your work is not just from one side and sometimes it could be from the other side and you can't finish it at one time.

'that your work' 中 'that' 多余，应去掉。'other side' 前缺少定冠词 'the'。'work' 是不可数名词，指代时用 'it'，而非 'them'。

× So you need to, umm, make a list. Then you won't forget it, forget about it.

✓ So you need to, umm, make a list. Then you won't forget it.

'forget it, forget about it' 两次表达重复，且 'forget about it' 通常表示不再考虑某事，这里不合适。建议只用 'forget it'。

× And also the one benefit is you can prioritize one thing that which is more.

✓ And also one benefit is you can prioritize the things that are more important.

'the one benefit' 中 'the' 多余，改为 'one benefit'。'prioritize one thing that which is more' 结构不清晰，'which' 多余，且 'more' 需要具体比较对象，改为 'things that are more important' 更准确。

× because some type of person they would think is will be very stressful if you make a list and.

✓ because some types of people would think it will be very stressful if you make a list.

'some type of person they' 主语重复，应去掉 'they'。'is will be' 语法错误，应为 'it will be'。

× because some type of person they would think is will be very stressful if you make a list and.

✓ because some types of people would think it will be very stressful if you make a list.

'some type of person' 应改为复数形式 'some types of people'，以匹配后文的复数含义。

× I prefer to make list on the paper, umm, which is write it down 'cause if you make it on the electronic devices and it will be very troublesome if, uh, if every time you have to open it and check the list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper, umm, which is to write it down, 'cause if you make it on electronic devices, it will be very troublesome if every time you have to open it and check the list.

'make list on the paper' 中缺少冠词，应为 'make a list on paper'。'which is write it down' 结构错误，应为 'which is to write it down'。'on the electronic devices' 中 'the' 多余，应为 'on electronic devices'。

× So if you put it, write it down on the paper, you can paste it on the computer around.

✓ So if you write it down on paper, you can paste it around the computer.

'paste it on the computer around' 语序错误，应为 'paste it around the computer'。'on the paper' 中 'the' 多余，改为 'on paper'。