List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。例如，可以说“I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy.”

例: I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves me time in the store.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和单复数形式。例如，“I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks one by one without forgetting any.”

例: I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks one by one without forgetting any.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子结构和用词可以更自然。建议使用连接词如“because”或“and”来连接句子，并注意语法。例如，“Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and find it troublesome to write things down.”

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and find it troublesome to write things down.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。例如，“I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and it's very convenient to add or remove items.”

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and it's very convenient to add or remove items.

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop.

The question is about a habitual action, so the present simple tense is appropriate instead of 'will' which indicates future intention.

× It can help me to remember what thing should I buy.

✓ It can help me to remember what things I should buy.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the word order in the embedded question should be 'I should buy' not 'should I buy'.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and I think it's really helpful because it can make things more organized and let me do the things 1 by 1 without forget one.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and I think it's really helpful because it can make things more organized and let me do the things one by one without forgetting any.

The phrase '1 by 1' should be written as 'one by one'. Also, 'without forget one' is incorrect; it should be 'without forgetting any' to use the gerund after 'without' and to express not missing any items.

× It may because they have a very good memory that they can remember all the things like what should they do next or what they should buy.

✓ It may be because they have a very good memory and can remember all the things like what they should do next or what they should buy.

The modal verb 'may' should be followed by 'be' to form 'may be'. Also, the word order in indirect questions should be 'what they should do' not 'what should they do'.

× Its very convenient to decline something or add something on the phone.

✓ It's very convenient to delete something or add something on the phone.

'Its' should be 'It's' (it is). Also, 'decline' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'delete' when referring to removing items from a list or phone.