List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and mostly natural, but there are minor grammatical errors and some redundancy. For example, "go for a grocery store" should be "go to the grocery store," and "by unnecessary things" should be "buy unnecessary things." Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice; instead, combine your points for conciseness. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go to the grocery store because it helps me stay organized and shop efficiently. Moreover, it prevents me from wandering around the aisles and buying unnecessary items.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and could be more concise. For example, "the urgent and significant task" should be plural "tasks," and "It does work for me because it helped me" mixes tenses. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I usually make a list at work because it helps me prioritize urgent and important tasks while postponing less critical ones. This method has proven effective in improving my productivity.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and could be more natural. For example, "it restrict them" should be "it restricts them," and "There are really people" is awkward; use "Some people" instead. Also, try to combine sentences using linking words for better flow.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to act spontaneously and do things at their own pace.

提案: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "sometimes it cut it might be lost" is unclear. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid starting sentences with "And." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and helps me stay organized. In contrast, paper lists can easily get lost or damaged, which can be problematic.

× I do make a list when I go for a grocery store.

✓ I do make a list when I go to a grocery store.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here because we use 'go to' when referring to going to a place or location. 'Go for' is used for purposes or activities, not places.

× Furthermore, it also prevents me from wandering around the aisles and by unnecessary things.

✓ Furthermore, it also prevents me from wandering around the aisles and buying unnecessary things.

The verb 'buy' was incorrectly written as 'by'. The correct verb form is 'buy' to indicate purchasing items.

× I usually make a list at work because it helps me to prioritize the urgent and significant task and do the less critical ones later.

✓ I usually make a list at work because it helps me to prioritize the urgent and significant tasks and do the less critical ones later.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural context indicated by 'urgent and significant' and 'less critical ones'.

× It does work for me because it helped me to be effective at work.

✓ It does work for me because it helps me to be effective at work.

The sentence is in present tense context ('does work'), so 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to maintain tense consistency.

× Some people don't want to make a list because it restrict them from doing the things that they want to do.

✓ Some people don't want to make a list because it restricts them from doing the things that they want to do.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'restricts' to agree with the singular subject.

× There are really people who want to do things spontaneously and have the freedom to do it at their own pace.

✓ There are some people who want to do things spontaneously and have the freedom to do them at their own pace.

The word 'really' is incorrectly used here; 'some' fits better to indicate certain people. Also, 'do it' should be 'do them' to agree with the plural 'things'.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is convenient and that way it helps me to stay organized.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is convenient and helps me to stay organized that way.

The phrase 'that way' is better placed at the end of the sentence for clarity and natural flow.

× And like when it's on a piece of paper, sometimes it cut it might be lost and that would be a problem.

✓ And like when it's on a piece of paper, sometimes it can be lost and that would be a problem.

The phrase 'it cut it' is incorrect and unclear. The correct modal verb 'can' should be used to express possibility, and the extra 'it' should be removed.