List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and clarify your points with better linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you save time and avoid forgetting items.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. This way, I avoid buying unnecessary items and save time by not having to think twice while shopping.

提案: Your answer is unclear and somewhat confusing. Try to give a direct response and explain your reason clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because my tasks are few and easy to remember. Therefore, I find it unnecessary to write them down.

提案: Your answer needs to be more precise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unnecessary repetition. Provide a clear reason and use linking words to explain your point.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it adds pressure or stress. Additionally, personal preferences vary, so not everyone finds lists helpful.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and explain why you prefer paper over phone.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it more engaging and easier to organize my thoughts compared to using my phone.

× Yes, I definitely make a list of the things I have to buy because that makes the things clearer which are which things are to be bought and which are not.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list of the things I have to buy because that makes it clearer which things are to be bought and which are not.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'the things clearer which are which things' which is confusing and ungrammatical. Replacing it with 'it clearer which things' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× And that does not does not waste the time to remind the things are to be bought.

✓ And that does not waste time reminding me of the things to be bought.

The phrase 'waste the time to remind the things are to be bought' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'waste time' without 'the', and 'reminding me of' is the proper way to express the action. This corrects the preposition and article usage.

× No, I don't make a list for my work because I don't have that much work to do that.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because I don't have that much work to do.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary 'that' which is incorrect. Removing the extra 'that' corrects the quantifier phrase and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Uh, some people find it a little pressurizing to make list of the things they have to buy, and it also depends on the person to person.

✓ Uh, some people find it a little pressurizing to make a list of the things they have to buy, and it also depends from person to person.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'depends on the person to person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depends from person to person'. This corrects the pronoun and preposition usage.

× Why don't they make list?

✓ Why don't they make a list?

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Adding 'a' corrects the pronoun and article usage.

× I would prefer to make a list on paper as it finds me more interesting to make list on paper.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on paper as I find it more interesting to make a list on paper.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it finds me more interesting' which is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I find it more interesting'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. This corrects the pronoun and article usage.