List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和不自然，比如“Yeah, yes”显得多余，且“the insurance”用词不当，应该表达“确保不遗漏”。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items. For instance, last week my list helped me avoid buying unhealthy snacks and focus on healthy food.

提案: 回答较简短且有语法错误，“It's benefits for me”应为“It benefits me”或“It is beneficial for me”。建议扩展内容，增加细节，并注意语法准确。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized. It benefits me by allowing me to prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively.

提案: 回答较好，表达清晰且有例子支持。但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，如“because”后面可以加“and”连接两个原因。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it's too much trouble and prefer to rely on their memory. For example, they might believe they can remember everything without writing it down, so they don't see the need to make a list.

提案: 回答自然且内容完整。可以尝试使用更多连接词如“because”后加“so”或“therefore”使句子更连贯。

例: I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to edit. Therefore, using paper can be troublesome since you need a pen or pencil and it's not as flexible as a digital list.

× It helps me stay organized and the insurance.

✓ It helps me stay organized and ensures that

句中使用了错误的词语“the insurance”，应使用动词短语“ensures that”来表达“确保”的意思。这里需要用动词来连接句子，使句意完整。

× It's benefits for me.

✓ It benefits me.

“benefits”在这里应为动词形式，不能加所有格“it's”，应直接用“It benefits me.”表示“它对我有益”。

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to edit.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to edit.

缩写形式“it's”在正式书面语中应写为“it is”，使表达更正式和规范。