List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to plan what I need to buy and to avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I make lists to organize my tasks, which helps me manage my time more efficiently.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够清晰。建议避免口语化的填充词，使用更准确的表达，并提供具体原因。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient or believe it wastes time.

提案: 回答表达了个人偏好，但重复使用“beautiful”显得不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇，并简化表达。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can access them anytime, and I enjoy using my nice notebooks.

× I want to plan something what I should buy and I think I need keep my desire.

✓ I want to plan what I should buy and I think I need to keep my desire.

这里动词短语结构错误，'need'后面应接不定式'to keep'，而不是直接接动词原形。应使用动词不定式形式。

× Personally, I think maybe it is not convenient for them to do a list and some people may think it is not worth to make a list before they do something.

✓ Personally, I think maybe it is not convenient for them to make a list and some people may think it is not worth making a list before they do something.

动词短语'做一个清单'应使用'make a list'，而不是'do a list'。此外，'worth'后面应接动名词形式'making'，而不是不定式'to make'。

× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my paper because I can read it whenever and wherever and I want to use my beautiful, beautiful books.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on paper because I can read it whenever and wherever, and I want to use my beautiful, beautiful books.

'on my paper'中的'paper'不需要所有格，正确表达是'on paper'。此外，句子中缺少逗号以分隔并列句。