List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复表达“I just learn from her”，且句子结构不够连贯，建议避免重复并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because my mom taught me this habit. With a list, we can find things quickly and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答较好，但表达略显口语化且缺少连接词，建议使用更正式的表达和连接词来增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work and have maintained this habit for a long time. It is very beneficial because it helps me stay organized and reminds me of tasks I haven't completed yet.

提案: 回答中用词不准确（如“broadcast”），且有重复和犹豫词，建议使用更准确的词汇并避免重复和犹豫。

例: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it difficult to predict future events, and they might feel restricted by following a fixed plan.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议完整表达观点并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: As for me, I prefer to make lists on paper because it makes me feel more secure. I like to keep the paper with me all day so I can check it anytime.

× Yes, actually my mom likes to go to the shop with a list, so I just learn from her and I just learn from her.

✓ Yes, actually my mom likes to go to the shop with a list, so I just learn from her.

句子中“and I just learn from her”重复出现，属于句子结构错误。应删除重复部分，使句子更简洁流畅。

× Maybe for them it is hard to broadcast what will happen in the future and sometimes, uh, maybe they don't like to be limited to the to the list.

✓ Maybe for them it is hard to predict what will happen in the future and sometimes, uh, maybe they don't like to be limited by the list.

“broadcast”用法不当，应使用“predict”表示预测未来；“limited to the to the list”中“to the”重复且介词使用错误，正确应为“limited by the list”。

× As for me, I'd like to make a list on paper, but because this may this makes me feel safe, I'd like to keep the paper with me all day and.

✓ As for me, I'd like to make a list on paper because this makes me feel safe. I'd like to keep the paper with me all day.

句子结构混乱，连接词“but because”使用不当，且句尾“and”未完成句子。应拆分为两个完整句子，去掉多余连接词，使表达清晰。