List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: "note note down"). Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Writing down what I need helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important. For instance, I often include both the items I want and the essentials on my list.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều phần không mạch lạc, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "you know" và sắp xếp câu trả lời theo trình tự logic hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. Usually, I prepare the list the day before to organize my schedule effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không hoàn chỉnh, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các từ nối và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because when they see many tasks on the list, they feel pressured to complete everything, which can be stressful.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên luyện tập nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

例: It depends on the situation, but most of the time I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me and can check my list anytime.

× Writing down what I need helps me take stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

✓ Writing down what I need helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

The phrase 'helps me take stay organized' is incorrect because 'take' is unnecessary and disrupts the verb structure. The correct form is 'helps me stay organized' where 'stay' is the verb in the base form following 'helps me'. Remove 'take' to correct the sentence.

× For example, I often note note down both the items I want and the essential.

✓ For example, I often note down both the items I want and the essentials.

The word 'essential' should be plural 'essentials' to match 'items' and to correctly refer to multiple necessary things. Also, the repeated 'note' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'note'.

× You know, it's the top of the things I have to do before I do anything.

✓ You know, it's at the top of the things I have to do before I do anything.

The phrase 'it's the top of the things' is incomplete and awkward. Adding the preposition 'at' makes the phrase 'at the top of the things', which is the correct idiomatic expression meaning the most important or first item.

× After that I always prepare the list of, you know, like To Do List then the day before.

✓ After that, I always prepare the list, you know, like a To-Do List, the day before.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and article usage. Adding commas improves clarity, and 'a To-Do List' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'then the day before' is unclear and should be rephrased or clarified; here, it is corrected to 'the day before' to indicate timing.

× Well, just for my perspective, I think it's kind of depend dependable because it's feel like when you see the list has a lot of thing to do, you would feel like pressure to you know like have to do all the.

✓ Well, just from my perspective, I think it's kind of dependent because it feels like when you see the list has a lot of things to do, you would feel pressured to, you know, have to do all of them.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'depend dependable' is incorrect; 'dependent' is the correct adjective. 'It's feel like' should be 'it feels like' to agree with the singular subject. 'A lot of thing' should be 'a lot of things' (plural). 'Feel like pressure to' should be 'feel pressured to'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'all of them' to finish the thought.

× Well, it it depends on each situation, but most, most of times I I just note, note them on my phone and you know, like I bring my phone to everywhere and I just can't check it any.

✓ Well, it depends on each situation, but most of the time I just note them on my phone and, you know, I bring my phone everywhere and I can just check it anytime.

'Most of times' should be 'most of the time' (singular). Repeated words like 'it it' and 'I I' and 'note, note' are typographical errors and should be removed. 'Bring my phone to everywhere' is incorrect; 'bring my phone everywhere' is correct. 'I just can't check it any' is incomplete and should be 'I can just check it anytime'.