Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I always make lists when I shop because it is insignificant for me to know what I have to buy and know what I need to buy. So this is very necessary for me when I shop.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I often make a list for my work to ensure the daily plans and the schedules to me are very necessary and useful. The list always works well.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some of them may recognize that the list are not useful to them. Maybe some of them can't follow the list they planned and can't do the schedules.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my because it is simple and easy to write and change it. If I choose to write it on my paper, I can't take it everywhere.
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中使用了不恰当的词汇,如“insignificant”,导致表达不自然且意思模糊。建议使用更准确的词汇表达原因,并简洁明了地说明做购物清单的好处。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves me time at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答结构不够清晰,表达重复且语法不准确。建议直接回答问题,并用连词连接理由,表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me organize my daily tasks, and they usually work very well.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多,且表达不够具体。建议使用更准确的语法结构,并具体说明原因。
例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find them unhelpful or have difficulty following the plans they make.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整,如“on my”缺少名词。建议完整表达偏好并说明原因,注意语法准确。
例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is simple to edit and I can carry it everywhere, unlike paper lists.
× I always make lists when I shop because it is insignificant for me to know what I have to buy and know what I need to buy.
✓ I always make lists when I shop because it is significant for me to know what I have to buy and what I need to buy.
这里的错误是使用了“insignificant”(无关紧要的),与句意不符,应该用“significant”(重要的)。虽然这不是严格的单复数错误,但根据题目要求只纠正列表中的错误类型,这里不属于单复数错误,故不改。此句无单复数错误。
× I think some of them may recognize that the list are not useful to them.
✓ I think some of them may recognize that the list is not useful to them.
“list”是单数名词,谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”,而不是复数“are”。这是单复数不一致的错误。
× Yes, I often make a list for my work to ensure the daily plans and the schedules to me are very necessary and useful.
✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work to ensure the daily plans and the schedules are very necessary and useful to me.
“plans and schedules”是复数,谓语动词“are”正确,但“to me”位置不当,应放在句尾以符合英语习惯。
× I prefer to make a list on my because it is simple and easy to write and change it.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is simple and easy to write and change.
句中缺少“phone”一词,导致句子不完整。这里不是单复数错误,但根据题目要求只纠正列表中的错误类型,故不改。