List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes I do. I often make a list when I shop because it can help me to remember what I need to buy instead of buying a lot of other things I don't need at all.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes I do. I often make a list for my job. When I look at my schedule, I could easily and clearly figure out what I should do 1st and which one is more important and so I can spend a very effective day when I work.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Well, in my view, some people just don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary and it will cost them a lot of time to write down the schedule. So. But personally I like making these because I feel more comfortable.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Personally, I prefer to make a list on my comparing to paper or notebook. My form is more portable. Besides, I could also make an alarm on my phone to remind me of my schedule, which is very useful for me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 85.0提案: 你的回答表达清晰且内容相关，但句子结构稍显简单，且有些表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need, so I avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容完整，但语法和表达上有些小错误，且句子较长，建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更自然。
例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for work. By checking my schedule, I can prioritize tasks and have a more productive day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议避免使用口语化的停顿词，句子应更流畅且逻辑清晰。
例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary. However, I prefer making lists as it helps me feel more organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免词语使用错误，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's more portable. Also, I can set alarms to remind me of important tasks, which is very helpful.
文法
× So. But personally I like making these because I feel more comfortable.
✓ But personally, I like making these because I feel more comfortable.
句子中使用了两个连词“So”和“But”，这是不正确的。应去掉“So”，只保留一个连词以保持句子连贯。
× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my comparing to paper or notebook.
✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone compared to paper or notebook.
句子中“on my comparing to paper”结构不正确，应使用“on my phone compared to paper”来表达比较关系。
× My form is more portable.
✓ My phone is more portable.
“form”应为“phone”，这是一个拼写错误，导致代词指代不明。
× I could also make an alarm on my phone to remind me of my schedule, which is very useful for me.
✓ I can also set an alarm on my phone to remind me of my schedule, which is very useful for me.
“make an alarm”用法不当，正确表达应为“set an alarm”，表示设置闹钟。
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